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SuperxXxGirl79
2009-10-13 . chapter 1
i really like the way you wrote this. it's sweet, but not covered in sugar, if you get what i'm saying. (nothing nasty implied there, so get your mind outta the gutter!)
Admiral Lily
2008-11-13 . chapter 1
An excellent story. And we romantics can't help being such. At least you can write a fic where the romance is secondary. I've yet to accomplish such a feat. :D
SNN
2008-07-16 . chapter 1
Okay, so this totally rocked. Loved the theme, and it was wonderfully written. Nice job! =]
Catspaw Blackgaard
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
Wow, I really loved reading this story! It was so sweet and perfect!
argentenipinkini
2007-12-24 . chapter 1
aww...casey changed derek for the better!
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AL
2007-11-27 . chapter 1
This was fab! Sorry I don't have any more to say but as THEY say "Sometimes less is more." ;)
Aqua88
2007-11-23 . chapter 1
AW. this dasey=love. seriously. Love how its broken up. TOO cute. and 'proud papa mode'? AW rofl

GREAT job. hope to see more oneshots.
princetongirl
2007-11-19 . chapter 1
loved it update soon
Silverian Rose
2007-11-16 . chapter 1
ah, that was a very sweet story!
Warlordess
2007-11-13 . chapter 1
Actually, I'm sorta disappointed in this. It wasn't what I expected, in a neutral way to some degree. . . There were typo's here and there and everywhere ('cause little miss impatient couldn't wait one afternoon to let me beta) and when you said there was a "hint" of Dasey, I thought that that was what you meant. Unfortunately, you spent almost half of the fic on it, and at least four or five different scenes, each one escalading further and further into the ship.

But it wasn't awful and, before you started heading too far down the shipping lane, it was downright impressive. To hear a realistic attempt, relatively well-written, on Derek's lifestyle leading up to and past his being grounded with the McDonalds. . . As that one reviewer you told me about said, it was a treat, and yours was probably one of the best, and most in-depth.

And now I feel bad for reviewing so not-positively. . . Maybe I should go review your other fic to make you feel better? You know the one I mean. :D

Btw, are ALL your fics from now on gonna be dedicated to me? XD
KRiSTiNEDAHLiNG
2007-11-13 . chapter 1
i elle-oh-vee-eed it. it was marvelous. that last bit at the end there totally made me smile.
the future of audio
2007-11-13 . chapter 1
great story, i liked it.

good job.
x Rafi
TheEvilRabbit
2007-11-10 . chapter 1
Beautifully written with just the right amount of Dasey at the end. I loved it.
Laura Ferrari
2007-11-09 . chapter 1
O! SEQUAL!
uncfaery
2007-11-09 . chapter 1
Hands down this has to be the best character-driven one-shot on Excellent portrayal of Derek's character and not turning him OOC once he capitalized on his "opportunity" and landed Casey. Bravo!
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