i really like the way you wrote this. it's sweet, but not covered in sugar, if you get what i'm saying. (nothing nasty implied there, so get your mind outta the gutter!)

An excellent story. And we romantics can't help being such. At least you can write a fic where the romance is secondary. I've yet to accomplish such a feat. :D

Okay, so this totally rocked. Loved the theme, and it was wonderfully written. Nice job! =]

Wow, I really loved reading this story! It was so sweet and perfect!

aww...casey changed derek for the better!
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This was fab! Sorry I don't have any more to say but as THEY say "Sometimes less is more." ;)

AW. this dasey=love. seriously. Love how its broken up. TOO cute. and 'proud papa mode'? AW rofl

GREAT job. hope to see more oneshots.

loved it update soon

ah, that was a very sweet story!

Actually, I'm sorta disappointed in this. It wasn't what I expected, in a neutral way to some degree. . . There were typo's here and there and everywhere ('cause little miss impatient couldn't wait one afternoon to let me beta) and when you said there was a "hint" of Dasey, I thought that that was what you meant. Unfortunately, you spent almost half of the fic on it, and at least four or five different scenes, each one escalading further and further into the ship.

But it wasn't awful and, before you started heading too far down the shipping lane, it was downright impressive. To hear a realistic attempt, relatively well-written, on Derek's lifestyle leading up to and past his being grounded with the McDonalds. . . As that one reviewer you told me about said, it was a treat, and yours was probably one of the best, and most in-depth.

And now I feel bad for reviewing so not-positively. . . Maybe I should go review your other fic to make you feel better? You know the one I mean. :D

Btw, are ALL your fics from now on gonna be dedicated to me? XD

i elle-oh-vee-eed it. it was marvelous. that last bit at the end there totally made me smile.

great story, i liked it.

good job.
x Rafi

Beautifully written with just the right amount of Dasey at the end. I loved it.

O! SEQUAL!

Hands down this has to be the best character-driven one-shot on Excellent portrayal of Derek's character and not turning him OOC once he capitalized on his "opportunity" and landed Casey. Bravo!