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BoogiepopShippuden
2008-04-30 . chapter 1
Its a pretty sad but very good story.
CuteAiboAibo
2007-11-09 . chapter 1
Teehee^^ Nice story so far. In the following sentence between Next and they should day be there?
Also would it be "...and in the next day, I would greet them happily..."

A few hours later I let everything go and in the next they I greet them happily again but I still remember how horrible they were...
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