 Pinkjimmychoos 2007-11-10 . chapter 1This story summed up the Chloe and Jack friendship very well. I love all the little details and the dialogue you have between them- I think you wrote Chloe brilliantly and it was funny and sentimental at the same time. The best line in my opinion: “Please tell me you haven’t been here all morning Jack, because this whole sitting and staring thing makes you look kinda creepy and perverted.” Classic! |