 Topgallant 2007-11-10 . chapter 1Oh, yay, first review!
Anyhow...what a beautiful story. I love the relationship you show between the two of them, and it's sweet to know that Niko finally has someone to love. ^-^
However, I noticed this one error. "...amount of course sand from the..."
I believe you meant 'coarse'
Great job! I'd love to hear more! |