 AkitaFallow 11/10/07 . chapter 1Y'know what? Your random references to yourself in the first few paragraphs actually adds to the story...
The first half is rather blunt, you know? But it works! And Grissom's comment right at the end is very good!
Short chappie, but it's an opener, so it's good. (My evil alternate personality (AKA Akita) says that it is a feeble attempt at a fic and should die a nasty death, but she also says that the moon's made of cheese, so... she always tries to contradict what I'm saying, and she's always wrong... Ignore her)Great job, as usual! Sigh... I wish I could keep up as many fics as you do, to manage the massive amount of fic ideas I have in my head... |