Oh, and the title is great too3

This is sooo good. You captured Shinji's essence very well. I love how realistic it is, due to all the characterization, and the setting. I also love how modern it is. The whole time I was smiling and wishing tht I was orihime lol. Wish it was longer. I must say, im far from being a writer, but this made me want to pick up a pen and give it a shot myself.

I've never thought of this pairing, but it could work. You wrote it well enough, and he is a flirt.

Loved this!

I adore this fic!

I hope you write more ShinjiOrihime fics in the future!

This was a great one-shot. I really like this couple and I think you captured Shinji really well.

Sequel please! :D

Very cute! I think you got Shinji down perfectly, and I think the whole thing was well-written.

I really like that way that you write this pairing. I never would have put them together, but you definitely make them compatible, somehow and it works. Great job on your little experiment.

I admit, I like Shinji too despite his weird smile or scowlish looks, I think underneath he's a great guy too. I mean, he was once a captain right. So, maybe, we have yet to scratch the surface. Great fic *big smile*

Very, very nicely done. Hat off for you, m'lady.
I could re-read your stories a dozen times each and still not get bored cause I always seem to find something new each time.
Shinji couldn't possibly have been portrayed any better than this.
Talent is a beautiful thing when people know how to use it.
Thank you for the stories, it's a pleasure reading them.

great story i liked your other shinjixorihime fic aswell. you should write more shinjixorihimes they're really good

You are amazing! I always like Shinji, he is cool! I like his evil grin. I hope you will write more about him.

Can I request a fanfic about Shinji with an OC?

I really liked this. I just wish it was longer. Like not a one-shot. I wouldve loved to have this carried on for a bit. Good job though!

awesome