Okay, here's my review for the whole story. It was amazing! I loved it! One of my absolute favorites! And, here's some of the parts I absolutely loved.

A stunningly sexy figure with onyx locks and viridian skin, dressed in the only clothes Mercus had of female nature: a leather halter top with a matching black miniskirt, leftovers from some conquest...She was posed by the table, barefoot toes braced on a chair so her attractive thigh was clearly visible...they merely watched as she smiled as if everything were normal, waved, and circled the table to continue her game.
~ Okay, I can so picture that being in like, a movie someday!

How much had changed in these two lives that the vicious rebel would seek peace while the society queen would seek a war?
~I just like that sentence for some reason.

“Who would imagine such a ballsy, tough-as-nails general would come in such a pretty package? You look so sweet, and then you plot cold-blooded murder. It’s like a cuddly killer bunny.” His laughter infected the others, and it only increased as her eyes narrowed. She didn’t get it. She wasn’t cuddly, and she was far closer to a viper than a bunny.
~ Just pictured Elphie's face. It's priceless!

“Can’t talk. Chasing Wizard.”
~That's just funny.

It was official – she hated guns now.
~I don't like you.

He watched his strong, beautiful angel look down at the blood spreading across her, her eyes and mouth wide open with shock. She looked up at him disbelievingly, as if asking for an explanation. Then she crumpled to the ground.
~I hate you.

In some weird kind of automatic self-preservation, she’d managed to cast a sort of healing spell on herself, and the strength must have knocked her unconscious.
~Okay, you didn't truly kill her, so I like you again.

Elation all over his face, he beamed, “We did it. Morrible is dead. She put up a hell of a fight, but…”

Elphaba stopped, dropping her end, and the others staggered at the sudden pull of falling weight. Turning to stare at her, she ignored their confused looks. She glared at Mercus. “You killed her? We weren’t supposed to kill anyone.” He blinked, confused, and she continued. “Hence the elaborate plot to drag the Wizard to the balloon instead of just assassinating him, which would have been much easier.”

“But…she was raining rocks on us. Surely that counts as self-defense at the very least.”

Elphaba sighed, picking up her side again so they could continue this ridiculous journey. Grunting as she lifted her portion of their burden, she said, “Well, it’s fine with me, Oz knows I wanted to kill her. But don’t tell Glinda. She’ll be furious.” They continued their journey with a little more speed now that there were three of them.
~Love their conversation.

“You may want to slow down there tiger,“ he cautioned. Normally she would have been mad, but instead she actually giggled. Appalled, she clapped her hand over her mouth. Had that Galinda-esque sound really come from her?
~I can pictue ELphie giggling like that.

She turned out to be a natural, and Mercus accused her of being a shark.
~I would too.

“Elphaba, slow down. We slept…slept…together. As in, lullaby and goodnight.
~That should calm her fears.

Oh thank god, I was sure you were gonna make her leave again, I am glad she came to her senses, I mean I no where she was coming from, but they cannot be happy without eachother, anywho, brilliant story, LOVED IT!! And can't wait for the next chapter of wrong lessons. ttfn.

(sigh) depressing but so beautifully romantic, I love this story because it starts as one of your usual romantic fluffy stories but with an edge but it develops so well into the second half of the story, after **. Very clever, and just awesome.

NO!! My heart is breaking, for him!!

AHAHA!! That's great!

This is fantastic! I just finished reading the actual book Wicked tonight and I was upset and crying and confused and I had left off reading this at chapter 31 last night. I read the last chapters of this and it just worked out that I finished the book and this on the same day. I am so glad I had this to read. You really captured so many essential elements of the story so well. When I was reading this I wasn't thinking to myself oh well this sounds far fetched or that wouldn't happen. It was an absolute pleasure to read this! Easily the best piece of fan fiction I have ever read not only about Wicked but about ANY fan fictions. You have a real talent for this and I am glad you are sharing it. Your writing has a distinct style and favor that leaves me satisfied and wanting more. Thanks for writing this. What a treat!!

I Love this story!
The whole Elphaba with the guys thing, it's just really good. Its currently 1:00am I have no better adjectives.
The whole fic was amazing!
The end scared me, i was like 'OMG HE'S NOT WITH ELPHABA', and he was.
I loved it :)

OMG! You scared me so much with that ending!
I'm crying! I was like 'He can't marry someone else! NO NO NO!'
but he didn't and its ok now.

I loved this story
i need more. well done.

i just ead this entire story in one day and i loved the whole thing!
i didnt really want to read it because the summary didnt really catch my eye and i was wondering how somthing that sounded so boring could have 33 chapters and 185 reviews but got bored and then couldnt stop the summary does not do it justice! this is such a great story!
i love the beginings at ** and my favorite part is probably where elphaba gets shot (im morbid ik)
the ending was so cute and so fitting i love all the pairings and especially the scenes where they are preparing to fight the wizard. the fools mission i really liked cant remember exactly who said it and what they said but it really stuck in my mind.
great story love it!

so... I was bored and reading over this... not only was the whole set up fantastic, but I absolutely head-over-heals love the trees bursting into flames and subsequent lines. witty. awesome. two thumbs up!

Yes! "You Get What You Give" by the New Radicals. I love that song, and always have!

On a more serious note, I thoroughly love how you nail Elphie's emotional state. It is perfect, and the romance is so heartwarming! You're wonderful at evoking the emotion of the characters, and I cannot wait to read the rest of your story! Onwards to chapter 14 for me!

Okay, I just found chapters 21 - 33. What a relief!

stunning. I couldn't stop reading, it was one sitting. I hope you plan on continuing. I'd be thrill to see what YOU do with the rest of the story. Thank you for an amazingly emotional, tremendously breath-taking read!

My heart is breaking! That letter... oh that letter! It was so stunningly beautiful. You are a crafts person!

I'm going for my tissues now... Thanks!