this is awesome please keep up the good work! I also cant wait to see what happens next in: Finding an Anchor, Neko Senshi, Rune Ranko, Lady of the Ring, The Weapon's Prisoner, and Prophecy of the Ashes please continue them they're really good and interesting!

Wow a wonderful story was up all night reading it till i finished. any chance you might write a 2nd story continuing this one?

wow... great story... is there a sequel?

read this on another site, loved it, so i thought i would say so here

Not a great story, but a very good one indeed.

I liked it very much.

Beginning writers (and I am guilty of this too) have a tendency to make their protagonists too strong - with the result that there is no credible challenge or even conflict possible. This weakens the plot sometimes.

I would like to see how it comes out. I'd almost offer to write the remainder, but that would be presumtious.

thanks for posting,

Mike

I don't like sword-and-sorcery medieval fantasy, as a rule. I like his one very much indeed. I am particularly pleased with the depiction of a pure heart, a benign innocence.

Thanks for contributing.

Mike

DUDE!

This is like the best Ranma 1/2 i think i have ever read...i've read this cover to cover prob 3-4 times now and it still rocks! Here's my first Review and I hope you write more stories like this one it kicks ass!

this has possibly been my most enjoyable reading exp. to date on fanfiction.net and i have been reading for two years now. I would buy this book in hardback if it were published. I would consider revising it and sending it to a publisher. It is well worth the effort in my opinion.

Great story.

I love your story, i think it is one of the best of all time, and i can't wait til you finish it.

I know it's picky, but it's a pride of lions not a pack : )

Still a very enjoyable story so far

I love this story.

Okay i see a lot of people asking for 'More' here and i wanna point out something *Points to the COMPLETE next to story* "This Story is OVER!" hah now if you want the next ARC of this story i reccomend checking out Grums Second Story 'Unbreakable Chains' and reviewing that ) its Arc 2 of This Storyline,enjoy all!

yes,Yes,YES! MORE please!

just one word "YES !" at last you started to write again, even if i find this chapter to be a bit short but anyway I can't wait to read what you'll come up with next.