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| Christian Ninja Rabbit 2008-07-27 ch 6, | abuseAw, poor XR. And you really had me going there for a second - I actually believed it was happening. Right up until the "kiss me again" bit. XD Hmm, Lion King? Was it "the sooner we find this thing, the sooner we can leave?" "The sooner we get to the waterhole, the sooner we can leave." Maybe I'm just reaching here. |
| ForeverACharmedOne 2008-07-27 ch 6, | abuseAw...poor XR. Why can't he tell her, indeed? Oh yeah, the Buzz part was funny. XD I just love that scene in Little Secrets. lol. Lovely work, as usual. As to the Lion King reference, I'm going to take a gamble that it's when Mira says she's going to go check out the cave and XR gets a bad feeling of danger? |
| Christian Ninja Rabbit 2008-06-17 ch 5, | abuseWow, BG! I really loved this one! Pure fluff and no angst, a refreshing change of pace from the past couple of oneshots (not to say that I didn't enjoy those - but this one was completely different in a good way) And I have to say, I'm a big fan of the movie Enchanted also - in fact, I just got that movie on DVD a few days ago, and I find myself constantly watching the ballroom part. =D It's cool to be able to put XR and Mira in the situation - and I felt bad for him about running over her foot. But that's okay. It certainly looks like she forgave him. =D |
| ForeverACharmedOne 2008-06-17 ch 5, | abuseAw! What a great way to start the day! (It's morning here) Reading this totally adorable Marred one-shot put a smile on my face. ^__^ I can just see XR trying to be all suave and cool so he impresses Mira, he fails, but in the end Mira shows him some love anyway. Great job! -Forever- |
| Alohilani 2008-05-27 ch 4, | abuseGosh, it took me way too long to get around to reading this. Anyway. Very effective. Very sad. |
| ForeverACharmedOne 2008-05-23 ch 4, | abuseOh yeah, it was effective. I think I'm about to cry myself here. *sniffle* Great work! Though now I need something really fluffy to un-emo my attitude now. lol. |
| Christian Ninja Rabbit 2008-02-24 ch 3, | abuseWow! I was happy to see you updated! :) That was really good. I felt sorry for XR in the end. Darned computers and their little blue bars! |
| ForeverACharmedOne 2008-02-24 ch 3, | abuseAw! I love it! Poor, poor XR. :( He really needs a hug, preferably from Mira. Please write more soon. I *need* to read the next installment! ^_^ -Forever- |
| ForeverACharmedOne 2008-01-18 ch 2, | abuseWow! I seriously hope that these two installments aren't the last! ^^ |
| SamCarter93 2007-12-09 ch 2, | abuseI especially liked the second chapter. Nice. Keep it up! |
| green glowstick 2007-11-14 ch 2, | abusehttp://ab103. ^My reaction to this. |