If you're going to take forever on this sequel, just delete it. Please? So less people will be disappointed - like me.

Num, here it goes:
I usually don't read angel/demon or romantic Malik/Marik fics, but I just had a need (yes, a need!) for a Malik-heavy longfic (there are so few! You have no idea how much I appreciate you writing him as a main character in longfics) and read ALFoR and than this. I was really impressed for the better, considering how much people screw up the characters at most fantasy fics. You writing style is flowing and very well descriptive and I just love your characterization. I think that because you're not such a Ryou fan you were able to get a more clear perspective on him and not make him as… feminine and cutesy as people tend to. And Bakura as a neat freak? Much love for you!
You also made me kinda like Seto and Jounochi together… even though I don't find any slash pairing with Jounochi all that appealing.
Anyway, thank you for writing such an enjoyable fantasy fics, and please continue? Now I'm looking forward to the reunion of Bakura and Touzoku. =)

I loved the adorable (could that even be the right word in this type of situation ?) banter between Marik and Touzoku, and even between Touzoku and Malik, your writing is amazing :D Update soon ?

-insert slew of pretty pleases here-

Love it! Update soon please! XD

update soon! i love this story, i read the other one in one day!

ah an update :D I was starting to lose hope!! But it was worth the wait, your writing just gets better and better. The dialogue between the characters is so damn funny, and I especially loved how Malik and Touzoku just continued to have total banter even whilst being attacked by two psychopaths xD I also appreciate that, even though you admit you don't like Ryou, you still manage to portray him in a semi-positive light :P All the characters seem to have a lot more depth too - it's like they've developed since ALFoR? It's great, anyway. This story is just so addictive and readable xD Please keep it up! I don't care how long it takes!

Hm...fanart...I think I actually did draw a picture inspired by this story...but it probably isn't very good xD and if I remember right, it's drawn on lined paper [I got really bored in school one day...and apparently I was thinking about demon-Malik :P who wouldn't?] Oh well, at least you know you inspired me to draw something based on your fic. And that's impressive, I don't think many authors get fanart :) You deserve it, though - you're really good and your ideas are really original. Please continue with your great work!!

(because spellchecker would just delete them all)

hyperactive keyboard smashing aside, C:
happy happy happy happy happy etc is generally the way i am feeling about this update

apologies for the late review, actually down to the fact my computer crashed for about a week (although of the 60 something backlogued emails i had to trawl through, the story update for this was by far the most exciting hurr i have no life)

anyway i shan't repeat myself because you already know how much i love this fic and how riled i get when you receive few reviews
BUT to end on a positive note,
i honestly dont understand how you construct every chapter to be successively more suspenseful, entertaining and rich in character development than ever; how do you do this? xD


SO much appreciation for your persistance to this project
lex, C: <3

Wow! You have really just kept up the intensity of this fic.

I'm never let down with your writing style and the fluidity you have with the character concepts. Please continue.

I sincerely hope you're co writer on the other fic comes through soon so you can update that one as well.

Outstanding chapter!

wonderful story! it is very well written and I am enjoying it very much. I can't wait to see when Akefia and Bakura meet! lol hope you update soon!

OH MY GOD AN UPDATE! *drastic heart failure* it rocks!

I dig that Katsuya and Seto brain swapped. ;] Pretty shwet idea! Cute chapter! Not enough Bakura/Ryou action but it's cool, I'm passive and already over it. :`D Anyways, Malik's letter to Marik was wayy cute, especially with the drawn in faces! I feel like Malik and I are so alike cuz I do that too! Can't wait to see what happens when they all go to hell and whatev. Please write more soon miss!

FANART!!
aleximosaurusmon @ deviant art

i would post a link, but i dont trust the crappy spellcheck on not to delete it.

anyway...

hiatus is bad news, but as long as you dont forgett~ then everything's cool =)

Ugh. It's three AM. -Whines-
But I'm here to review, just because I adore this story, and the prequel.
So uh.
LOVE, ADORATION, ETERNAL WORSHIPING.
-Coughs-

I've just read both this an LFoR at once I couldn't stop reading them!
I hope you keep writing this because you're a really great writer and I love M+Ms relationship in this fic!!

^_^

Awesome, as usual.

Anticipating the next chapter ;)