-giggle- I hope you continue with more sequels.. XD These are amusing and lovable xD

:P love it ... great work! Gotta love royal ... those two are perfect together!! Omake at the end is pure genius ...love it heaps!!

Dwah! TTATT -dies-

LMAO~! The last sentence is hilarious! xD

“Che. Get your hand out of my pants, pervert. Your mom’s watching.”

I like the whole idea of the story, but not the way you write it.

I am not trying to be mean here, just a little criticism.

You rely way too much on dialogue. The talking is leading the story. You need more details, sure they may seem boring, but this way the reader can imagine it just how you wanted and not how they see it. If they see it differently then you imagined it then it might ruin the whole story.

On a good note! I like the humor, very original. Just work on fine tuning the little things and it will be perfect.




Holy crap that was long X]

Is there going to be a sequel for this?

Aw~ This is just so sad...

But the misunderstandings are so dramatic! Kyaa!

Love love love LOVE this fic!!~

Such an awesome trilogy!!

I hoppe you write a sequel!

I just read all three of the stories you've written in this series, and I love them all!

Great work and I can't wait to see what other stories you end up writing.

YYAYY!! They end up together! of course!! that's expected, but I LOVE IT! Atobe and his melodramaticness... but so sad for Jirou.. Jirouxatobe is one of my favorite pairings... Then sengokuxatobe..

Sorry not leave review before u.u -xx- Wonderfull fic ^O^~ Nanjiroh ist a idiot sometimes, but still, he is adorable x33

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Just like say; your fic was lovely -x- A like the Drama with romance ♥~ And Atobe ist the Queen of Drama XDD -xx- Wîth Ryoma feel's that way ^^

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I hope read more Fic's your's (Fuji/Ryo or Ato/Ryo)

Ah! I enjoyed reading this very much. Poor Jiro - someone won't like grape Ponta anytime during his life... o.o

I thought the time where Jiro faster so Atobe wouldn't see his face very... real. Perhaps, weirdly, my favorite line.

Anyway, good luck! :)

I really love this story. I think it's just so sweet. Too bad there's not any hot lemon. I still love it thought. Thank you.