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| The Wineglass 2008-05-17 ch 17, | abuse“the tendency of brass to play after they've been asked not to"-lol. Applies more to flutes in my band, but that's probably because the first flute is REALLY obnoxious/talks a lot/plays too loud/etc. and the flutes all follow him. Very amusing, like usual! |
| The Wineglass 2008-05-04 ch 15, | abuseYay, you've updated! (and when you do, you apparently do it with a vengeance. Do you usually update in such huge spurts like this?) Hilarious like usual. I loved the flute/clarinet banter. SO realistic and believable. LOL. "Are you comparing me to a trumpet?" Maybe I should try that on a flute... LOL. (In case you haven't noticed, this is a bulk review for all 5 chapters. Don't post in bulk like that and I won't give bulk reviews like this.) It's rather hard to keep the rest of the fellowship straight. Maybe you should put a key or something. Keep writing, and thanks for the favorite authorship hood thingy!:) |
| grondavor 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abusethat was cool. Please read my story "Alzeran" and tell friends. |
| Verity Kindle 2008-01-24 ch 7, | abuse"Peanut butter Reece’s Cup Sing this song to cheer you up Bang, bang, choo-choo train Come on [insert name, do your thing! I can’t! Why not? I just can’t! Why not? Because my back is aching My belt’s too tight My booty’s shaking from the left to the right! To the left, to the right To the left to the right to the left to the right Peanut butter Reece’s Cup... -Traditional Clarinet and Flute Traveling Song" ROFLMAO |
| The Wineglass 2008-01-08 ch 8, | abuseLoved your modified rhyme-"all that is pretty is not pleasant, all that is lost can be found, the determined are meant to be winners"-very amusing. *starts laughing again* And the "tower of the Rising Pitch" and the "Resting Tempo"-hilarious. I'm a little confused at which instrument corresponds to which race, and how the whole language thing works. But it's really funny! |
| The Wineglass 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuse*laughing* very funny... as a clarinet player in band, I can totally sympathize with "don't get too close to any brass alright?... Especially any trumpets." Nice job translating the names into musical terms, and no mistakes or anything. :) *starts laughing again* |
| Sakura999 2007-12-02 ch 3, | abuseHey, good fic. I liked the plot, and like Marisa's character. Would like to read more - update soon ! If you like you can post on w w w . justexpressing . com - the readers would like it and you would get some more reviews and feedback. I did that. You can join and post under Books - put in under Lord of the Rings sub cat. |