Hey! It's been a while since I've read this story. I have to say that I missed it really. :)

I kinda forgot what was going on, so I was kinda lost at first, but now I think I remember! I'm excited for more soon!

Yay an update!It has been awhile.Anyway great chapter!

I liked this chapter, and i like the title u chose for the next chapter, "Pieces" ...hmm that sounds oddly familiar. haha

anyway, i really like ur writing, the characters are so...funny, yet serious at the same time.
it never gets me bored.

so yea...well this chapter was short, and yea i wasn't expecting an updated. but i still liked it.

and Alex and Angel being siblings was not so surprising (at least not after you so cleverly mentioned that Alex had red eyes)
that was a big 'red' flag, no joke intended.

anyway, so yeah...hm...interesting couple in the future...wonder what dat means?
and as for Axel and Angel...and her having a connection.
i think those two are gonna have a relationship in the future.

but i thought Angel and Sora were something, at least LAST story (sequel-ish thing) they were.

hmm...interesting.

ok so i know this is bad, but i really enjoy the fighting in this story...all the characters are witty and oddly funny. haha

anyway, so yeah...overall nice chapter :)
good job and UPDATE SOON!
but no pressure, i know how it feels...updating for me has become a very difficult and well far off task for me as well.
=P
BYE! :)

I missed you. Wow, that didn't seem akward. Anyway, good to have you back. New chapter was awesome, and it kinda taught me a lesson. I'm a decent writer, but the little gaps between the main action always throw me. So, thanks, you've actually shown me what to do, and I owe you one. Keep rockin'.
-Trance Fusion

Dude You're making a comeback! I haven't heard from u in a while this chapter is pretty good Little strange with making Alex gay, but hey I'm all 4 it^^! But his sister has got to have some dark, shady story to her character. OH I CAN'T WAIT 4 CHAPTER 6!! See ya soon^^!

P.s. Are the survivng members of Organization 13 making an appearance in the story? Get back to me soon^^!

Sweet job! I took the time out of my schedule to read all four chapters of this story. ( I would've read it sooner, but summer+ My own story= All work and no play!) Let's just say that I was on board from the first chapter. Keep it up.
P.S. I noticed why the new character was so special!

Yeah, I can really tell that you have improved so much from Double Date! But anywho, I liked this chapter, but I'm not sure yet what was so important about it... oh well. Good luck with the next one!

This is a Riku and Axel pairing??

I haven't deserted your story, I've just been really slow at catching up with all the alerts I let pile up. I remember why he's special! His sister is like, Axel's love interest or something, right? (I haven't read in a while, forgive me for mistakes...) I love the Sora/Kairi fights! They're hilarious!

Yeah it was a bit longer I noticed.And Alex is Angel's brother,right?

YEAH! i am happy, but i cant help the urge to say finally. :)

good chapter as always! :) and i can see the paragraphs getting longer...see the problem with me...they are paragraphs in word...but somehow when i make the chapter a document, they all turn into scrawny lines. blech.

anyway, OF COURSE i know the sigfig! :)

that is totally ANGELS brother...you know SORA'S girl with the RED eyes from Rocky Relationships! :)

and yeah me, haha, it only took me like two seconds to make the connection...i know what an accomplishment, right? haha =P

too bad i suck at being sarcastic.

anyway, i can tell you are trying to make everything like deeper and stuff, it is nice to read the characters thoughts instead of them just going through the motions. :)

i think i like it best when Sakura talks, i mean they all haver personality, but she...i dunno...

anyway, lets just hope that A-L-E-X and A-X-E-L have no relationship...lets hope...

unless Alex killed Lar-Lar...or wait, that was like Xemy right? oh gosh, i cant seem to remember. darn. :(

anyway highlights and predictions:

lets see...i have to say i really enjoyed reading Kairi and Sora's argument (in the restaurant) very amusing, i have to admit.

it gives the fic you know that little extra LIFT! that is required for like happiness...in life.

anyway, predictions:

hm...well are you going to have another chapter on the boat? or are they gonna run off to collage now?

i sure hope collage, cause the boat was nice, but Jack...it is time for you to go and get drunk somewhere else...haha =P dont get me wrong i loved it, i just cant wait to see which characters you bring into the story once they start classes...if they ever do. haha.

i am hopeing for some Cloud and Tifa...Yuffie, i am EXPECTING some Angel...possibly some Hayner and Ollete...all that jazz.

so yeah, keep up the good work! and dont forget to update! K?!?!?! BYE! :)

So this is Angel's brother! Awesome! (Faithful reader.) Glad to see Axle's getting better! Once again advise making these books...

Weaknesses? I think your weaknesses are...um...
I think it's describing. Some of it's very good, but I guess people like me don't get some stuff.
Try to make the person visualize what you're seeing...if that makes sense...Ehehehe...
Otherwise, everything else is your strength. Double Date was nice, I liked that one because it had so much humor. I think you main strength is traumatic stuff...But somehow you make it interesting with the humor bits here and there, so it's not completely gloomy, and I like that.
I'm happy you updated! ^^ Even though I don't have an account, it's fun reading your stories. Good day!

I'm so sorry it took so long to read this chapter! Y'see, my email has been haywire with alerts-half the time I can't even sort out all my emails and I delete them all just 'cuz I can't deal with all the spam. This got pushed pretty far back in the inbox, so it took forever to register as needing to be read and looked at. Sorry! I definitely will still be reading, have no fear!

Alright! Livid Love is out! Cool! Arigato!