Wait, so David is a kyns? Awesome!

This is definitely an interesting story. The idea of 'redeeming' David is just a bit overdone, I think, but I'm curious to see where you'll take it.

I like the idea of psychic alien 'humans' hiding out on earth with the Chee. In just about any other fic I can think of, the Aelar would seem unrealistic. But in the Animorphs, where psychic aliens are common, they not only fit into the world very nicely, but they even take the 'psychic alien' theme a step further.

I look forward to seeing more! Keep writing!