 MelodiousStarfire 2007-12-09 . chapter 1This was one of the best fanfics I've ever read, reguarding grammar and spelling. No careless errors (or maybe I've become immune to them?) that I can see, and I like Beast Boy's narrative. Good job! I don't think critisism is really nessesary at this point of the story- I look forward to reading the rest! |