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| JellybeanChiChi 2008-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseGorgeous. Just found your stuff. Love it. Thanks for sharing. |
| Ricker23 2007-11-17 ch 2,  | abuseThis was great! And especially for a first fic. Love how you used Sunday to reflect on important days in their lives. And I love how she snuck back to see him and celebrate in his accomplishments. Great job! Looking forward to more from you. :) |
| Emily 2007-11-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseI loved it! That was so sweet and oh, if only... |
| ajechi 2007-11-11 ch 2, | abuseThat is so heartwarming... That was a good one. If only things are as simple as that... Yeah, that's why they call it fanfic, right? |
| CSI4CoolBeans 2007-11-11 ch 2, | abuseI really liked your story, very well written |
| danielakian 2007-11-11 ch 2, | abuseif only this could happen on TV. First fic? This is too amazing to be your first fic! Hope to see more of your work. |
| Mingsmommy 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseHe liked the quiet, because during those times, he could pretend she was still there. That was a heart wrenching and beautiful line. This was bittersweet. I love the Sunday tie in. |
| NickyStokes 2007-11-11 ch 2, | abuseOH I so loved this...it would be great to play out on tv. I think you did a phenomenal job with your first fic and look forward to more |
| MSCSIFANGSR 2007-11-11 ch 2, | abusethis is a nice change...me sending you a review...this story was wonderful. i want you to know it's very addicting, getting happy reviews and the only cure is to keep writing. putting you on author alert...:) chauncey |
| theyHAUNTme 2007-11-11 ch 2, | abuseAwesome fic...especially for your first fanfic! Please write more CSI fics soon...amazing job! |
| CR1-GSR 2007-11-11 ch 2, | abuseWonderful ,this was so sad and so full of hope at the end,you managed to convey Grissoms emotions so well |
| GSfanatic 2007-11-11 ch 2, | abuseOh, wow! That just made me cry. A very good cry. I needed that. Thank you so much. |
| sky m 2007-11-11 ch 2, | abuseGreat fic, especially for a first one! loved the first chapter, Ch 2 was nice, but I didn't get why Sara was going to walk away again... Thanks for sharing. |
| coldtoes 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat! loved it! |
| mischiefrg 2007-11-11 ch 2, | abuseGood job for your first fan fic. Hope you write more! |