I really liked your story. I enjoyed the references to the series and felt the language reflected the era well.

I love stumbling across All Creatures fics, and this one is great! So wonderful to see things from someone else's point of view. And it's got so much Tris in it I can't wait to read on ;D

That was brilliant! I felt just like I was watching another episode...It was accurate to the times and uou kept Tristan so much in character... and I love his attitude towards Mary in the end. Odd-I wish there was a sequel, but then again it's also best left up to the imagination, I suppose. great job!

Wow! Quite a work. Very well crafted as well as entertaining.