I love this story! I think you should describe it more though. I'm a little confused on who Wendy and Rebecca is. If you could describe the popular girls more that would be great. And I really see who Lola is. Keep writing, it's super good.

So far, I have only good feelings from this one. I haven't noticed too much errors in this, so I'll just focus on the good things.

The excellent thing is, that it's not an ordinary South Park fic. It feels much different from the show itself, but everyone is still in-character, which is good.

I also enjoyed the descriptions you have here, and you also have a good cliffhanger here. I'll just wait and see if you're going to update this one.

~Secret Santa

You know, I'm really enjoying this fic. :o

Can't wait for the next update as I really want to know who the person is.

This was a really good chapter!I can't be nit-picky about your stories,there too good!I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Aw. Poor Lola. And do I detect a cliffhanger? And I'm assuming the the guy is either Kenny or Clyde. Because, for some reason, they're always smokers.

Anyway, I noticed a few grammatical errors/typos (run-on sentences, that sort of thing), but, other than that, nice chapter.

And I thought that Kyle/Rebecca had died out. :P

Sexy Kyle goodness always makes me smile. Lola being an artist is a cool twist, I must say. But what is this Kyle/Rebecca and Lola/Stan I detect in the summary, hmm? I like it a lot. Nice description and such.

Have fun with NaNo. Get back to writing this soon.

Good story.I like when people focus on the minor characters that are never really brought upon in the episodes.Good job :)

Wow, Lola's getting more screentime lately. Maybe she's the next Heidi.

Anyway, I like it. Lola seems like a really sweet protaganist (sweet as in kind, not sweet as in swet). I thought she had brown hair, but I can always watch "Follow That Egg!" again. Can't wait for the next update.

Oh, and I'm doing NaNo, too. Well, nominally, at least. I haven't written anything in the past week. :)