|Reviews for Untitled|
| Holly 5/27/10 . chapter 1
Love it! I realize this is probably a little late, but please continue it!
| RazzleDazzled 9/16/09 . chapter 1
This was a great expansion on one of the best scenes in the series- really enjoyed it!
I offer only one piece of constructive criticism; your writing wavers between several tenses and it can be a little jarring to read one sentence in present tense and the next in past. If you can work on that aspect of your story-telling and really focus on making sure that everything is written in the same tense, you'll more than deserve the 'top-notch' title as an author! _
Thanks for a wonderful read- I miss this show!
| Pagan-Angel13 4/6/08 . chapter 1
I liked it, how she found comfort in his mere presence and didn't want to be parted from him for any reason.
I liked how you left it but at the same time how it can be continued.
I hope you continue this fic as it started out really well and kept me interested.
I really hope you continue as I'd like to see where this goes especially after the last line of the fic.
| GuardianOfTheLastStar 1/15/08 . chapter 1
I like this. you should carry on
| Quicksilver19 11/13/07 . chapter 1
Nice chapter... you should continue!
| lagentillefan 11/11/07 . chapter 1
For me,yes,TBC...I'm curious to see what you will write about us!
Love this pairing!