that was quite incomplete
well i felt so

YAY! That was really cute. Well done. Dramione forever

Okay, I may not be a fan of the pairing but...

IT WAS JUST TOO CUTE.

Great story. I like how you ended it. Well done!

LOL! That story was soo cute! Loved how you ended, "Even Hermione Granger" it was just soo, can't describe it was like the perfect words. I don't really read Harry Potter stories on here, but I'm happy I read yours. Can't wait to read more from you!

~T.G.

First of all, I didn't really get what the beginning was about, what was she doing that she shouldn't have been? That was never explained. Second of all, your grammar needs a lot of work. I suggest you look up the a/an rules, if the next word starts with a vowel you put a, if it starts with a consonent, an. For example, an elephant, a dog. Sorry, that was just something that completely bugged me. It is quite apparent that you are a young girl with a lot of free time on her hands, because in short this one shot didn't make sense, both Hermione and Draco were OOC, and the whole plot (or lack there of) was pretty ridiculous.

OMG!! this story is soo cute i loved it. ur storiez r soo amwsome please write more!

Great story!

Just a piece of advice. You're obviously a novice on writing and I recommend that you get a beta to read over your stories. I've found a lot of grammar errors. And the point of view is inconsistent. If you start in Hermione's point of view, then I suggest you carry on in the same manner 'till the end. Such is confusing. And your plot is ok but the way you've delivered it is in such a hmm...how shall I phrase it? Unjustified and childish-of way. You should substantiate why events happen and elaborate on that. You've raised a lot of questions unanswered, albeit indirectly.

- Hope I helped.

P.S. Beta's help a lot. And it would also be a whole lot easier for readers to read better stories than these ones if you get a beta.

Hey, i dont get the story but guess its ok :D

wow! 1 shot! hehehe!
nice xa...
:p
keep it up!

..hey!!..nyc story xis..ase ka continue..lurve it!!..LoL..=))

Aww...dedicated to me? Yay!
Ahaha, how cute I loved it!!
Draco saves 'Mione!! :D :D

lovelove
Amanda