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lov
2008-05-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey Raigo. Since you like my story Life After Walking down the Isle, I'll bring it back. I thought no one cared for the story and I thought it would be boring. When I post it again, there may be some changes, including your suggestions on the first chapter. Thanks for your support.
midnitemood
2008-05-03
ch 5,
abuseok so I love how you made Pedro so innocent but at the same time he's growing more passionate towards Jimmy it's so sexy and hot! but it kinda seems like you're going too fast with them but it's still an awesome story!
Nae'ka
2008-04-26
ch 5,
abuseIt's really fluffy and cute!! I am still haveing a problem with the fact that it reminds me of Petey, but I still like it. XD

Nae'ka
2007-12-17
ch 4,
abuseI tell ya, I avoided this for a while... XD Because you portray Pedro the way that I picture Pete. But that is stupid, I know.

X3 So I read it! *loves* Continue already!


~Nae'Ka-chan
inu animechibi23
2007-12-10
ch 4,
abuseLmao aw Jimmys so over protective of pedro all of a sudden. the pedofile bit was pretty funn tho lol Great job hope you update soon.
Foxy'O'Fire
2007-12-09
ch 4,
abusegreat story!i like it!
midnitemood
2007-12-08
ch 4,
abuseAww such a cute story please update soon
MyMusicFilledHeart
2007-12-08
ch 4,
abuseI like the Jimmy X Pedro pairing!(heehee jedro or pimmy)
You express their feelings well!
I can imagine those two together!!
-Ashley
Chiba.Kun
2007-11-22
ch 3,
abuseWhoo, Jimmy's gettin' Kinky!
Nice job Zak. Teehee, a cliffy.
Chiba.Kun
2007-11-14
ch 2,
abuseTeehee, good chapter! I like!
Nae'ka
2007-11-14
ch 2,
abuseX3 Gas, huh? THAT'LL BE eighty million dollars please! (gas ain't cheap, you know!)


I love the way the story is going. XD I'm glad you added other little kids in there. It puts another dimension to the story.

Thumbs up!

~Nae'Ka-chan
Chiba.Kun
2007-11-13
ch 1,
abuseHey, Raigo, this is really good so far! I still don't know much about Bully, but... you seem to be going good places with this. I'll keep up for sure!
Nae'ka
2007-11-12
ch 1,
abuseHey! I remember you from other fics! I think you should clump some of the sentanced to from paragraphs, but other than that, A+! X3 Pedophile-y maybe, but still an interesting subject.

ALRIGHT! I hope to see more out of it!
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