 feedthemonkey 2007-11-16 . chapter 1 Wow, this is darker than most of your usual writings. I love the way you've set out all the details of their relationship, it's really sweet that Sakura stuck by Ino.
And the tense you used for this has a really well-thought out effect on the mood and the way that the fic is interpetted.
Am I right in thinking this is your first Yuri-based Naruto fic? ^^ You've done well! |