Very good story. Very interesting the way you move through the timeline. I love the mini-chapters; they give the story the feel of a longer story, but in compact form. Does that make sense? I love the last "chapter." It really shows Mohinder's mindset and it works beautifully with the other sections. It wouldn't be nearly as powerful if the buildup wasn't as good as you wrote it. Anyway, very good story.

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