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| colette11 2008-07-23 ch 1,  | abusesequel! sequel! |
| coca nigerian princess 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseaw that was cute =] |
| audi katia 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseyay! They relieved some sexual tension! lol I like the detail you include in this story. |
| SnowPrincessMossy 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseIt's great! I really love it. |
| Qzil.wrat121 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuse"Conversation" yeah, so that's what kids call it nowadays ... That just made me feel old Good story, funny, the last line really made it. |
| OddObsessed 2007-12-11 ch 1, | abuseLOL I loved it. "We're kind of busy, Xana!" Haha very cute. Really liked it. It's on my favorite stories list! All I could ask was that it was longer. but it said everything it needed to, so I suppose it would've been hard to make it longer... Well anyway, I loved it! They need to just get together already! -OddObsessed ^_^ |
| Yumi-Ulrich4ever 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseAmazing as always. So very adorable, Rena dear. You're inspiring. Hope to see more from you soon |
| PLF94 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abusethat was great i really liked it |
| linkinparkfan4ever 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseReally funny, especially the end. That's probably the only way anyone can win an arguement with Yumi |
| Japanese-Fanatic 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseaw! That was soo cute! I loved it! Can't wait for another one! Japanese~Fanatic |
| Lyoko'sPrincess 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abusewow this sounds oh so familiar lol nice job |
| Alexandria J 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseI loved it!! But u know the 1 thing I hate about oneshots?... they're too short. Oh and by the way, ur writing more stories when u have others that need to continue?? Well anyways, I'm grateful for it!! |
| Sparkling Mist 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseEvery time you get sick, you turn out one of these awesome stories, and every time I read one of these awesome stories, I can't help but squee. Get well soon, but not too soon, if you know what I mean. |
| Itban Fuyu 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseHow cute^^ Loved it^^ Itban Fuyu |
| samuraigurl1213 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat idea, I loved some of the lines and things. I, however, must be completely frank with you. This was an amazing idea and there were several AMAZING parts. But as a whole, the idea needs to be filled out more. It felt a little rushed, and a little OOC. I loved the idea of kissing in the stairwell, and the jealousy and all that lead up to it, but I feel it needs to be polished up some more. A little more drawn out, not so OOC of random jealousy and a random kissing scene, more build-up, you know? Either way, I LOVED IT -Em |