This is SO how it would happen! Love it!

Killer love.Literally. Amazing.

sequel! sequel!

aw that was cute ]

yay! They relieved some sexual tension! lol I like the detail you include in this story.

It's great! I really love it.

"Conversation" yeah, so that's what kids call it nowadays

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That just made me feel old

Good story, funny, the last line really made it.

LOL

I loved it.

"We're kind of busy, Xana!" Haha

very cute. Really liked it. It's on my favorite stories list!

All I could ask was that it was longer. but it said everything it needed to, so I suppose it would've been hard to make it longer...

Well anyway, I loved it! They need to just get together already!

-OddObsessed _

Amazing as always. So very adorable, Rena dear. You're inspiring. Hope to see more from you soon

that was great

i really liked it

Really funny, especially the end. That's probably the only way anyone can win an arguement with Yumi

aw! That was soo cute! I loved it! Can't wait for another one!

JapaneseFanatic

wow this sounds oh so familiar lol nice job

I loved it! But u know the 1 thing I hate about oneshots?... they're too short. Oh and by the way, ur writing more stories when u have others that need to continue? Well anyways, I'm grateful for it!

Every time you get sick, you turn out one of these awesome stories, and every time I read one of these awesome stories, I can't help but squee. Get well soon, but not too soon, if you know what I mean.