Nice, simple, lovely.

You've really captured the lack of understanding Logan has about himself and also his inability at times to find value in his own life. Of course he would think that others' lives are more important than his.

Aww... I thought it was really cool! Who says you can't write poetry?

:) I like!

I thought that this was really good. The only thing that I don't think Logan would have written was, 'Cuz' . But other than that I thought it was really cool. Oh and hey, I am an author of a Dark Angel fic to! 'Heart Strings' . Read it!