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Lance58
2009-11-17 . chapter 2
next please make more
Fate Trulygood
2009-08-05 . chapter 2
Yeah this is really short, i don't mind though.
If you need some plot you can ask us readers for some :)
Fate Trulygood
2009-08-05 . chapter 1
Nice beginning :D
I could imagine Fate joining kendo, after all Bardiche could transform into sword.
liz
2009-07-30 . chapter 2
i am very interested to see where this will go. excited to read another work by Eagle, of course. i know you said there may not be updates but i certainly hope there will be.

i guess a thanks to Enraptured are also in order...

and i am very interested to know which other fics will be updated! if there was a hint, i completely missed it but, anyway, YAY!
Honulicious
2009-07-30 . chapter 2
yes definitely surprised to see this story back up! but i'm excited.

can't wait to know about nanoha's and fate's past...since they both try to ignore it. maybe they've met before and need some help remembering. is nanoha also in a club? martial arts club? hee

well, i hope you do cont! i always love your stories about these characters.
ErnestTheGuy
2009-03-19 . chapter 2
wow, it seems like all the people's work that i have been reading are written by girls, and they all seem to know each other. kind of weird. anyway, i like the way you narrate your stories (if you can call it that since this one have no story really lol).also... UPDATE PLS!

"GR"
*rages at ur slowness*
elfspirit7
2008-08-18 . chapter 2
YAY awesome! Please update as soon as you can, can't wait to read the next chapter XD!
Enraptured
2008-08-18 . chapter 2
"Fate Testarossa, of course, had been automatically voted by random classmate A, backed up by nearly half the class."

MY VOTE LIES WITH FATE. :D (Do you even have to ask? xD)
-enthusiastic.
Heh, that made me laugh. So, so true.

Anyway, YAY AN UPDATE!
And Nanoha and Fate are growing closer!
Oh. Class reps huh, interesting.
That means... more time for them to be together... alone... xD

Fate's knowing half-smiles are to die for ;_;

-pokes.
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS 0:D
And no words can express how ecstatic I am that your MSLN muse is back.
(Thanks for the shoutout!)
crzy4anime
2008-08-17 . chapter 2
woot! update. sadly i have to say that i needed to refresh my mind on what this was but when i did i was completely happy. ^^ i really like the concept and the little glimpses of fate and nanoha's relationship. i love the ending and nanoha's misstep with fate's name- it was cute. i can't wait to see were this goes. keep up the superb work and until next time. ~_~Suchi~_~
Samuraixz
2008-08-17 . chapter 2
u should make this a NanoFate fic cuz its starting to look like it anyway

but nice story anyway!
clarec97
2008-08-17 . chapter 2
The update is really slow but at least you update, please don't stop, I really like the way the story is going.
Please continue, take good care and happy writing
SMF - Young Lovers -
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
very interesting! you've got my attention! whats going on w/Fate eh? please continue!

Ja! Keep up the good work!
whowants2kno
2008-05-22 . chapter 1
Great chap, can't wait for more.
clarec97
2008-02-29 . chapter 1
You have an interesting plot to start with, I believe it will be interesting when you continue but I really hope it won't be too long before you add another chapter. I like the kendo club idea and the way Nanoha and Fate first met, Nanoha falling into Fate arms. So far you have not mentioned about Hayate, hope to read about her in the next chapter, she can be an interesting character to include out of the blue situation.
Happy writing
Momo329
2008-02-28 . chapter 1
Cool story. I'm beginning to like high School AU alot.
Hope you are able to update. ^^
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