This is Getting good. I really like this.

Ooh, sounds like trouble. Nice way of introducing Tegwen to the rest of the Fearsome five.

Intriguing. Somehow the plot reminds me of that sspanish soap "Mujer en el espejo."

Well, regardless of all we've talked about tonight, I'm really glad you decided to post this here.
People need to read it (even though it's centries old :P)

Um... at this point should I comment on this story... cause I know everything *tries not to get too high off of ultimate Alternaverse power*

Love ya babe! Love the story, where that "Shaken" update I was promised :D