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| Teishya 2008-04-06 ch 1,  | abuseHahahaha, freaking hilarious. Loved it! :) |
| shadowfang901 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abusethat's funny as hell |
| Spiritblade 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseFrom a show, I quote a famous line - I truly pity the fool (Raki). He is not going to survive this particular harem when they're through with him... |
| crazyhorse08 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseHaha, I thought this was an amusing read. While not a fan of Raki in any way, he was certainly readable here. For some reason I can see this as a little Claymore special, although I shudder at the thought of it if it actually happens. You did a really good job at the Clint Eastwood dialouge. It was funny, but I have to say the part that amused me the most was: "Tabitha stumbled, with no shortage of pained winces and curse words, to the tree that Deneve was leaning against. “So explain to me why you weren’t involved in this?” Deneve snorted. “Men do not interest me.” Tabitha decided to find another tree to lean against." Anyway great job, it was an enjoyable read. |
| The Mad shoe1 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is whitout a doubt one of my favorite Claymore fics thus far, exellently written, great humor and a young man being the victim of several females unbalanced hormones, just the things i love in a great fan fic. =) Oh how i wish that this could be a series. |
| JWM 2007-11-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhile I don't believe that the Claymores could easily have a sexual relationship with a human, I find this rather amusing (and enviable). |
| Arakan7 2007-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abusePECKING ORDER~!! LOL, Oh man, I loved it. Meh, rough but who cares - Miria jumping in and taking the prize. XD I wish I was as lucky as Raki was though... ;_; HE GETS ALL OF THEM! |
| S-Michael 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abusecute. i've got to ask, what did that other author have to do in return for this? |
| evil-kenshin 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuselol i feel sorry for raki in a way, but pretty funny anyway |
| Alucard180 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abusenot bad wouldn't mind this being expanded and adding more content, |
| Byakuryuu 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseDo I even want to know? Short and quick, this is. But one of the better flash fictions I've read. Pecking order indeed. 8 outta 10. Expansion on comedy would have been much more enjoyable. |