Reviews for MANFREDS EVIL PLAN TO RULE THE UNIVERSE PART ONE

elizzib27 2008-09-19 ch 5,	abuseHahahahahahaha!
froggiefriends 2008-08-27 ch 5,	abuselol
elizzib27 2008-08-20 ch 4,	abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OMG!! HILARIOUS!! The Watermelons thing was so funny! I can't wait to read more... ...There will be more, right?!
froggiefriends 2008-07-30 ch 4,	abuseROTFL!awsome=D
silverdragoneyes14 2008-05-22 ch 1,	abusei think it's good so far...but you should change how you format the story. and you should use more quotation marks. but it's still good!
ellajaytorsson 2008-02-16 ch 3,	abuseThat was weird. In a good way of course, but still weird nonetheless.
black-venom-heart 2008-02-09 ch 3,	abuseHey! your story is super funny! and yes, Manfred and Asa are awesomest. you might want to seperate what your character say with quotation marks, because its kinda hard to know who's saying what. this story is hilirious! update soon!
ellajaytorsson 2007-11-16 ch 2,	abuseI love this story. so, what's the plan come on you can tell me it's not like i'm going to ...KILL TANCRED, ASA AND MANFRED IF YOU DON'T. seriously though. please tell me. I like watermelons too
M. Shattermirror 2007-11-13 ch 1,	abuseYou need a beta. NOW. O_O Besides the major dizzymakingness of your comvoluted text, I like the idea. It has potential. Manfred's branching out. ~M
black-venom-heart 2007-11-13 ch 1,	abusehaha! hilarious! i like it alot! keep writing!