Good story, but ew...just ew. That's kinda gross...but still a good story.

that was SICK how could you end the chapter like that "eyes glowing in ANTICIPATION" no that was just a no no you should of just finish it Kaname/Zero

Really, it amuses me how you came up with that *chocolate* thing... You really did a good job!

gahh! Can't believe this! It's so angsty that I can't help but be angsty as well...I can help but think about poor zero and his and kaname's situation...I can't help but hurt for zero...i wish that he could have some kind of solace or something, that he wouldnt just have to rely on kaname for affection or attention...i think that someday he's just gonna blow up and not be able to take it anymore...I don't think that love would be enough by then...but anyways, i'll start reading APFU, even if my heart hurts whenever i read about them...TT_TT...but all in all, it's a great fic dear! hope you get over your block for your current story, while I myself will get on starting on it as soon as...NOW! (lol)

CHOCOLATE! completely priceless!! i laughed until i cried, and then i laughed again! you rock!! ^^
happy writing!!
-Aekinia Illyar-

*sighs* I'm often struck by how different vampire and human notions are, especially Kaname's since he's a pureblood. I totally sympathize with Zero's 'you want me to watch while you screw other people?!' view. If I were in his shoes, I'd probably throw a fit and break it off. Which kinda shows how much Zero loves him because he doesn't.

The amount that Zero sacrifices for Kaname - I really feel sorry for him. We know how much pride Zero has, so to let himself be seen as Kaname's 'pet'... his hunter ancestors must be rolling over in their graves. Yet he does so for Kaname's sake. Kaname - he clearly loves Zero but because of his upbringing and nature doesn't see anything wrong with sleeping with other people because only Zero is special to him. I don't think he quite understands why Zero feels hurt >.<

Oh, and the fact that Kaname chooses Elyse at the end...removing the threat, hm? He still feels insecure regarding Zero...or is that my own imagination? ^^;;

Oh, and the chocolates! XDXD I couldn't understand it in APFU until I read this. Drunk on chocolates! Lolz. And I love this line

“Yes. Does it go out of your system overnight or do you need to eat jelly beans as an antidote?”

Zero, I love you so much :P

this was quite good!
i really enjoyed reading it.

-evilgoddess1990 loves ya

Gah! I love it, but did you have to add the last bit with Elyse? *pout*

how come i overlooked this so far?? i can't say. but i'm really happy i found it so i could indulge in some wonderful ZxK while waiting for another chapter of your current story... i liked elyse, even though in the end her character comes out a bit shallow. then maybe it's just her vampiric nature. it occurrs to me just now, especially after reading about him and sara a few hours ago - zero really has no friends of his own :( i'd like to see him have friends some time, it also makes me think about how his relationship with a grown-up yuki may have been like...

kaname being drunk on chocolate was *great*... illusion-san hahaha XD and i loved zero's crack about the jelly beans.

the part after zero takes of his charm seems a bit rushed, but i love kaname's rant, saying he'd wish to change for zero...*mush*

thanks, like many times before, for some great fanfiction (& invention) writing :D

thanks for

Another great fanfiction *applauds*. The only thing: I was a bit confused at the end.

Yeah! Me loves it! Please update soon so that I may know what happens next, man, it really bugs me that Kaname has to sleep with all those women. . . poor Zero-chan . . .

Hey! I love this! Your stories seem very sensible/logical and follow the VK's story plot. And all those great zero/Kaname stuff and action! Anyway, please please make another sequel or another zero/kaname story!

col story im a big fan of your so hurry and come up with somthing new
fox out

Poor Zero!

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I love you Zero/Kaname fictions.

Ha ha, the grand epic of Kaname and Zero continues! You know you're spoiling me, though, right? Now I'm going to expect this continuous series of their exploits and all the adorably funny banter they have. I love the chocolate problem. Is it because vampires seem to be rather canine in aspect at times, thus the problem with chocolate? But wow. Zero is my hero, what with the jelly beans and all.

I hope you continue to write more stories about them, whether in the Strange Relationship universe or in another. THANK YOU! THANK YOU!

Wow you are amazing.