 Inarae 11/20/04 . chapter 1 Hey, this was your story? I read this a LONG time ago and really liked it ... Yep, this is just good.
How you manage to push so much DEEP-ness into a story I don't think I'll ever know...Let's see, in this one you have a very detailed description of both pilots and their personalities, war commentary, you managed to heal Heero a little (something that usually takes novel-sized blocks of texts) make Hero trust Duo (ditto), talk about the life of a Gundam pilot enough that the reader feels like they know it...
Heh. thanks for writing and sharing, in any case! |