Good ending to your story, with Roger and Jaclyn singing together with all of their family there watching them.

I loved the way this chapter turned out! I think it is soo sweet!

I love the idea of Jackie playing the guitar for him. I also love that she wrote a song for him. Basically the cutest thing ever. Then he started to sing it with her.

Yeah, I loved it and am a little sad to see it end. It has a very nice ending though!

That was so sweet, and so perfect! I loved it! Great ending. Cute, sad, and powerful. Seriously. Great job!

Well, I did it. I caught up! I'm not sure I've ever done this much reading in one sitting...I really, really like this. Jaclyn and Roger's relationship intrigues me...she has a good plan. Update soon?

Haven't they had enough pain in their lives? It isn't fair.

I like that Roger seems to have a nice thing going with his band...but the hand shaking is bothering me. Those judges remined me of American Idol, and the crying judge was like Paula.

Aw, so cute!

Yay! Mark and Maureen! I'm a big shipper of the two of them.

Okay, I asked my ? a little early...now we know what happened with Mimi. Poor Roger. Mimi/Roger is such a beautiful pairing...and Roger has not had very good luck with girls in your stories.

Comment 1: I cried from I'll Cover You (Reprise) to the end of RENT once, too.

Comment 2: Mimi isn't dead?

Loved the last little bit! Cute. Yikes - Roger calling Jackie Andy is not going to help a relationship...

Good chapter, especially with the part about Jocelyn offering to play guitar for Roger. At least he's doing something productive to help him with his Parkinson's. I can't wait to see Roger's reaction to her new skill.

Good chapter,especially now that we know what's wrong with Roger.

Ok. I love Jackie learning how to play the guitar to help him.

I think that is the cutest thing I have ever heard. Ever.

Awe!

Of course Roger gets outta his head by running. It makes a lot of sense. Really does.

I totally can see Mark pestering him to stay on the positive side of the disease.

All of the Boho's reactions seems on spot.

Loved this chapter

Me

P.S. I love Roger's name ;-)

Wow...

Just wow...

This is the shortest chapter I think you have ever written! ((Not a bad thing at all)) Yet there is so much exciting information in it. ((Not exciting in a good way, but they cause excitement, ya know?))

Wow.

Poor mark, I can't imagine having to see your bff do that when you have no idea why...

So I am guessing the CBGB's gig is over now? Or can he still play? Also Jackie and Mark are gonna hafta take care of him, right? Will Maureen help in her kinda unhelpful way?