Its been over a year since you last posted a chapter I hope you have'nt given up on this its realy good so please get another chapter up soon

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Good to know u still stick to this story, great job!

nice, very very nice I like a lot. This writing, diction mod EVERYTHING it really made me feel better just reading this story I'm so very glad you updated. It was the perfect length for me as well-well for today, I'm still slightly um burned? is that the word by such thoughts but I hadn't a reason to keep them in my mind any longer. I could really picture the rain-the rain, skull kids...danger. Ayden's thoughts were nice to read about too you can tell he really admires Saria...Love his jealousy of Link "smart **" xDD perfect. I could go on, but I shall leave it at this. The rain in this chapter to me is setting the mood not of healing as it seems, but as curse-something forbidden has happened...that is what the rain is to me.

Oh no! stupid witch! great job, awesome grammar, cant wait for more...did i miss anything...no? good! lATERS!

nice, chapter as always. poor Ayden...I wonder what or who the two are? I like the description even though you used less than usual I was still able to visualize it. So far I like where this fanfiction is heading and knowing you-you won't disappoint me and only continue to improve it and make me want to read this story as much as I read the 'seeing' triology. Great Job.

Poor Saria...

update plz!

hey, nice chapter-longer than the previous ones. Ayden is so awesome xD or maybe i just like shiekahs? xD haha Saria is still somewhat bitter about the whole inability to leave the forest- I don't like Zelda too much in this fanfiction she comes off as preppy...xP and Link seems mean to Ayden T_T well both of them do actually. Love the description and THE RAIN! oh the rain is just so very very awesome! haha the dialogue and interaction between Saria and Ayden was interesting-where are you leading Lady Saria? o.O

You don't have to answer mine. I'm just letting you know I'm here. ^_^

Hey, nice chap. Seems like Ayden and Saria are really getting along. Are you gonna pair them up? great job

Interesting chapter. I think that Saria was really OOC in this chapter. After all, she was noted for her kindness towards an outsider like Link. That is something that many of the other Kokiri Children weren't known for.

The story is decent and presents an original idea. Is the Fado used the Kokiri from the Wind Waker. I'm sure even he had a past that was never fully described.

This is pretty awesome, ur stories rock dude, keep it up!

-is being stayed posted...that doesn't make much sense...Sorry-