This is such a wonderful fanfic. Very well done.

I loved your fic and think the outher reviewers are jack asses.

One: I do NOT like Ryo as the seme. Two: Sage is way out of character. and Three:...I can't think of one. Other than those though, I will have to give you credit on your writing ability. This story is written very well. Very good in description, and details. I liked it in that aspect, for not many authors are able to write so well. I look forward to seeing more of your work...Though I tend to shy way from stories with Ryo as the seme. For some reason, that I just don't want to go into at the moment, it seems wrong. So, anyway...yeah. Good luck on your future writings.

That was the first Sage/Ryo or Ryo/Sage story i did not like. I do however, think you have have great potential (sp?) and I look forward to reading more of your work