that was a funny story i loved it.

lol!! i couldnt stop laughing! i think it's so funny! especially how ed gave al as a "present" to the iron blood alchemist^^ i cant believe they let a minor get drunk tsk tsk tsk^^ lol great story!!

XD Wtf, lmao...that was slightly distubing, but awesome XD

OMFG! can't stop laughing... =))
Sh!t this dang funny! LOL...
Congrats, it's a really good one!
See ya!

OMFG THAT'S AMAZING! *dies laughing* oh my god that's one of the funniest things i've ever read XD

~~moonshine

Dear god...

Poor Al. XD this was hilarious. Especially Mustang's hair.

1. Add a little bit more detailing here and there.
Ed snarled angrily through clenched teeth as he opened the door to South H.Q.

2. KEEP IT PAST TENSE. How many books do you read that say: "He stumbles off into another seat. He looks up to see Mustang on Armstrong’s lap stroking his mustache and whispering into his ear." Nevertheless, I think that's the only time you did it in this fic. So kudos on that.

3. Did I mention details??

Yes. WHOPPER! WHOPPER NO ONION! pickles...bun seeds...ice...sweet and sour sauce...