I WANTS MORE PRECIOUS! MORE!..more random Skie/Kree crazyness...

If I were you, just to kind of make an introduction to the characters, and make the transition easier from the escape of the robots to the two girls in the shop, I think you should add a little more description of the hotel, the shop, what they did all day. Maybe some dialogue, you know, a little forshadowing, like, "O wow, it's really dead today. I wonder why its so quiet?" or maybe just some stuff about why they both wanted those jobs, a little background, ya know. Also, I think it'd be so cool if you added more verbs and discription to the fight scene, to add to its awesomeness. But I gotta give you kudos on one of the most creative ideas for a story I've read yet. And the dialogue is hilarious. Huzzah!!

yup, totally most unoriginal names ever. but hey the truth hurts.

*hands Skie and Kree trophy*

This is turning into an amusing chapter. Plus the AI robots are cool. You got another reader, so will you add another chapter?

OMG! Can't wait for the enxt update!
Me?
...I'm still working on it...-.-u

ZOMG, hi Skie! Sorry for reviewing so late I was...doing homework! Yae, that'll work...
ZOMG, it was AWESOME! ONTO CHAPTAH TWO! ^^ AWAY!

I never know what to write in reviews...

Yes... I wonder...