I have nothing bad to say about this fanfic it's really good and I'm on the first chapter! Your really talneted at this introducing the charaters and cliffhangers and such and such.

All and all great 1st chapt

All i got to say is nice job. You are freakin doing a fantastic job on the character of each spartan. These guys make my adrenaline spike just like the chief and like whening i'm playing football. Nice job man.

Love the story! stories about halo from u are always great!

I like the description it sounds like the spartans are going to find some 'snags' which will be good... .

Just read all 8 chapters and I must admit that I am impressed.

Exremely creative. XLNT work!

yey a dead theta but id hate to see an army in the real how are they gonna get out of soon!

how'd i miss last chapter? o well there both still at an excellent standard and im feeling like im part of the story as i do with other excellently wrote fictions keep it up!

that creature is gonna hurt

i thought it was really good. i wrote one about a New Covenant War. i hope you continue to write more on this story and others

still going well.I like how the characters have developed and cant wait to see what the new creature is.

good story like how you've made 2 playful spartans and think AI's are good...But being better than cortona?Equal possibly,better i 't like downing spirits but at least upgrade cortona.

I like the AI's...

(I can't think of anything else to say. Sorry.)

Good luck on the story, it looks good so far.

i must say this story is amazing i cant wait for the next chapter ;)

Great story so far; it's an entertaining read and the dialogue is good. I would only suggest separating the quotation marks and maybe proofreading it a little more carefully (don't worry, there are only a few errors). Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon.