 Gadget 2008-01-18 . chapter 1Wow. I really, really liked that (and I'm picky about my psych fiction!) Well written and a really good insight into the characters.
I hadn't really though of what it would have been like if Shawn had siblings but you've made me wonder. |
 zookitty 2007-12-18 . chapter 1Aww thats adorable! Really really great job! |
 g0shawk 2007-11-28 . chapter 1*waves* hi! :)
It's bittersweet. I feel so bad for Henry! Especially here: "But Henry had been terrified the entire time that he would lose his only child."
Nicely done! :)
(p.s. --> "it had taken the doctors dayss")
-g0 |
 WayLowHalo 2007-11-25 . chapter 1Aw, poor Henry. Nice job. |
 pansnymph 2007-11-15 . chapter 1Nice,
Was the first thing an allusion to Henry telling Shawn it took him four months to smile at his father? |