Very cute fic :3 I enjoyed it very much :D

this made me say aw out loud! aw! lov it!

Hmm...I did love the proposal. I thought it was sweet, and he owed it to her, especially after their drunken actions. I enjoy stories like this, but again, i think Zoro was out of character in the situations you put him in. Zoro does tend to blush around Nami, and he's not so rude when it comes to emotional/personal matters. He is acting a bit to much like, dare I say, Inu Yasha, with dog-like parental attributes.

I do not mean to flame, I did enjoy the read. I am just suggesting that you tone down his manliness and realize, that as Zoro, he does tend to get flustered and embarassed. Normally, Nami would be the one to start, and he would be the one to finish. But just as I said before, I do like your interpretation of him, when he isn't being too rude.

--Ryoku's Jiki Sweetie

Congratulations.
This story is really cute.
I like it so much.
I hope you'll write more Zoro x Nami's fanfictions in the future ^^
And once again, congratulations.



Cloudsdreams

Ah! Cute! So cute! I can die happy now after this fic! It was so gorgeous and charming! Two happy and perfect couples! A big nad happy family! Thanks for sharing it.