Izuna, seemingly created simply te be annoyin. I know better. Ye don't strike me as the type te make a character for such a trivial purpose.

Greater Good. Perhaps the two word phrase I hate more than any other. It is an excuse. A justification for the destruction of people and ideas. The greatest hero does what he must and atones for his sin. The best case I've seen for the greater good was Code Geass. A man who conquered the world, committing horrible deeds and becoming the most vilified and demonized person in the world. A man who focused the hatred of an entire world upon himself and then ordered his own assassination to destroy that hatred and atone for his crimes.

Introducin Rei-chan te the epicness of course. And everytimes ye bring ins Da Boyz, I laughs. Ah shit, I be pickin ups yer accents now.

It be takin me three days te read this long ass prologue of yers. I ain't never seen a prologue so long I thinks. And just so's ye knows, I talk like this mahself. Though, I can pick up an accent iffen I read or hear it enough.

Dude! Dude! Dude! This! Is! Awesome!

I'm hooked. I'm honestly hooked.

Never, and I mean NEVER would I think that i would be so freaking tired of the Yoda accent. Ugh...

you know this whole Shinji-doing-weird-powerful-shit gig is a bit... well, i'll keep that to myself

wowsers... only at the end did I realize that you actually put the Original Evangelion Intro Song lyrics in. Brilliant!

I can practically hear it in my head now.

Lol at Rei wanting to make a harem for Shinji.

SO this is it? the "first season", so to speak?

Not bad. Not bad at all.

It was epic and weird. Hell downright ludicrous at times.

Well then! Onto the second season! Yay! Lets go stomp sumthin!

"Pilot Sohryu, I am charging your laser."

damnit... i knew you'd say that


shinji pulled out 4 magic nuke stopping arms, Deus ex machina much? still Deus ex machina... very fitting all things considered

Sweet Jeepers...

Time to comment:
There isn´t anything I can say about how awesome this story is that others have not yet voiced.

I still need to say it is epically awesome.

Now to the unhappy part I need to do:
There are chapters where the structure of your story is difficult to comprehend which makes reading rather complicated sometimes.
Though this chapter was not problematic it would be nice if you could use the old structure from your first chapters.

I know you will push threw with this story until it is finished, keep the awesome comming.

Now it's official; if I were your psychologist, I'd be forced to throw you into a padded room with a I-need-a-hug sweater. Much like the entire Games Workshop crew, and the creator of Neon Genesis Evangelion, I suppose.

Where the hell do you come up with this shit?

Don't answer! Rhetorical question! It's Epic Awesome anyway...

'What a bastard!' the waiter thought as he left. 'I hope someone stomps his ass.'

lol

rei gonna git j00.


i LOVE da inglish they use, and all da boyz too,

Oh god. I just realized that the final line is a reference to a Penny Arcade strip about Warhammer. Admittedly, it's fantasy Warhammer and not 40K. But, still. I love you, Charles Bhepin.

I love pretty much everything in this story but i was wondering if you could add a touch more sappiness or love to the story that would make things even better. I mean you have the actions , good blasts of comedic gold, and now all you need is somemore romance and hugs and it will be OVER 90!