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nihilabyss
2009-11-04 . chapter 24
Until "Timeskip Troubles part 1," this was probably the best fan-written story of any series I have ever read. The change was so crisp and refreshing from the original Evangelion, and you managed to tie everything together so perfectly.

Since the timeskip chapters, the story became difficult to read. The chapters, aside from being too long, are weighed down by boring politics and the beloved characters of Eva are set aside until the next dragonballz-esque fight scene takes place. There is no longer the familiar vulnerability that made fans love the series in the first place. The story has become stale. It seems like the epic adventures of Shinji are overshadowed by the next. Save your story before it turns out like Dragonball Z and Shinji becomes a level 4 super-saiyan.
Skouth
2009-10-31 . chapter 40
Epic, that's all.
Fa/tg/uy
2009-10-27 . chapter 40
Holy shit, I know where that omake comes from, I forget the book series but that was indeed hilarious.
Nanuq
2009-10-25 . chapter 40
Awesome.

Somehow it doesn't surprise me that you read Harry Turtledove. Awesome.
Relden Calder
2009-10-24 . chapter 39
The Terminators "Deep Striking" into combat because it was taking too long to crash reminds me of this: http://gannadene./art/Fuklaw-Planetfall-109136753

I have yet to determine which was funnier.
Kitsune
2009-10-22 . chapter 28
Just finished chapter 26. Greatest. Fight Scene. Ever. That is how the mystic is supposed to work, with a little physics and a lot of imagination. Thanks!!
Orchamus
2009-10-16 . chapter 12
Come on, Shinji and Rei NEED to still have contact, whether or not Gendo permits it.
Orchamus
2009-10-16 . chapter 11
NO! REI!
Orchamus
2009-10-16 . chapter 8
...holy crap, such charisma to shake the world and form it anew...
Orchamus
2009-10-16 . chapter 4
Damn, such charisma.
Orchamus
2009-10-16 . chapter 1
Damn, this goes deep. Now I see why it has as many reviews as it does. Might want to give him a clothing change.
nightbug08
2009-10-12 . chapter 2
And now, per my last review I have to say that all my wildest dreams have come true. Squee!
nightbug08
2009-10-12 . chapter 1
I know next to nothing about both of these fandoms,but I know enough to say this. Your Shinji rocks! This is an excellent story, well plotted and with very few grammar mistakes, the only thing I can think to say is that maybe you should consider some kind of section separator. And for that to be the only thing I can think to say out of that many words? You sir, are some kind of genius.
Escalus
2009-10-10 . chapter 40
Bhepin you strange, strange person. Lots of information here and all of it very confusing. In terms of suggestions...could you maybe streamline it? Or at least make te connections between segments and chapters clearer?
Baughn
2009-10-08 . chapter 40
Fleetlord Atvar? *Now*?

Oh, this I've *got* to see. Don't you dare let it stop with just one omake! xD
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