|Reviews for Deconstruction|
| Twilight-in-ur-eyes 4/27/08 . chapter 4
You know, this story is like when u are taking a stroll in the park and suddenly you saw parachute coming down from an airplane. You know, not normal yet totally fun to read.
I like how you put Akito's life into something more happaning in this world. And how you involve other character as well..
Kyo being the popular and so protective of tohru and Yuki being the emo? Haha.. that was a bomb! It's so not him but so like his personality..
Ren is being Ren.. which is great! Cuz iv she's good then the whole plot of the story is unstable.. Rin is cold yet care-free.. for some reason, I like how she can gets along wiv Akito.. so does Yuki& his frenz..
Tohru too.. I like how u made Tohru as someone who equals to Akito herself.. so they see the world same view.. one way or another..
**Hehe.. I wont critique this story cuz there's nothing to be critique about.. It's nice! Dun stop.. ever!
| Katsheswims 4/26/08 . chapter 4
Great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! So I wonder if anyone knows Akito is a girl. At the end Britt might seem to know, but that's just guessing.
| StrawberryAkito 4/25/08 . chapter 4
StrawberryAkito is a registred user now!
And that chap was great as always! *_*
I always start to jump around in the house like a freak after noticing that the story continued XD
My mom always gets into crazy fits and jumps after me.
lol. its so awesome.
Anyways, back to the point -
I really love Akito in gym class. Its so cute to imagine Akito running after all her classmates. (Am I too mean? _ )
And I like how Akito 'stalks' Tohru! /
Akitos such a sweetie!
You really make all the characters very in-character.
even without the curse! O_o
that IS difficult!
many many respects
| lindajrjt 3/2/08 . chapter 3
Good chapter although it is still weird reading Akito as a female. This story is getting more interesting so please update soon. Oh and I was surprised that Tohru is almost blind. Keeps me to wondering how that is going to play into the story.
| loritakitochan 2/22/08 . chapter 3
I realize the characters haven't so much in common with furuba...but it's ok ;D
But then again Aki's relationship with "the Woman"...
"If I had been there...at the edge of the world, I probably would have jumped off...possibility of landing in another place where everything was different."
I LOVE this line!
Kyo is a popular athleic guy and the "prince" Yuki a kind of emo?
I'm so happy "your" Tohru isn't the true Tohru!
Akito starts to have friends!
thank you for this chapter!
you write so beautifully it is really worth to wait!
| StrawberryAkito 2/19/08 . chapter 3
Whoa... Im so happy... First I thought, you wont continue this fic. But I was wrong *_* I really love this fanfiction, I like how you write and how you describe the characters...
And I like Goth-Yuki, OMG XD
And FemaleAkito x Tohru is SUGAR *_*
Drugs! yay! XD'
Please Go on with this Story! Its just great
I cant wait for the next chapter *_*
*goes and reads chapter again*
(my english is BARGH! Sorry ')
| BitterSweet27 2/19/08 . chapter 3
This was a great chapter! At first I thought Daniel was Momiji, but I guess not. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
| Unregistered Authoress 2/18/08 . chapter 3
*squeals* YAY! Female Akito/Tohru! Hehe... Sorry it's just that I've never read one and I really wanted to.
I like the alternate universe that you've set this in. No curse and yet it holds the story together.
Interesting that Tohru is blind-ish. So does she know Akito's a girl instinctively? I like the way you've written her character by the way. Not really out of character but just tweaked a little.
I really enjoy all the background info on Akito's past and first relationship. Felt sorry for her though. Love the friendship between her and Hatori!
Overall this fic is well written and I really can't wait for the next chapter!
| BitterSweet27 2/7/08 . chapter 2
This seems like it will be a really great story! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
| lindajrjt 1/19/08 . chapter 2
I am not usually into these kinds of stories; but it is well written and I would enjoy seeing what happens next.
| loritakitochan 1/4/08 . chapter 2
I like this chapter even more!
So I was right,isn't Japan!
"Are you blind? I-I mean… sorry, I forgot.”?
Well,the teacher must know that Akito is female!
| loritakitochan 1/4/08 . chapter 1
I like to read a Akito yuri even if with Tohru (she is so annoying) but I guess you will changed her a lot.
The writestyle is A,goods description,words chooise etc.
I have a few question .the story is without curse,no?.I have the feeling they aren't in Japan,or did I misunderstand?
I like the Akito-Hatori friendship,like a big brother.
| quixotomy 12/2/07 . chapter 2
God, I love this story so much. I was so happy when I saw you'd updated. This is so original...such a great twist on Furuba.
You've made me LIKE female Akito...a feat I hadn't thought possible.
In the manga I see her as whiny and annoying, but here she's got so much more depth to her. Are any more of the Furuba characters gonna pop in sometime?
I also like the little detail that Tohru is blind. I don't know why, but I feel that it gives the story a little more life, if you know what I mean.
| dishrag-chan 12/1/07 . chapter 1
Can't be bothered to log in cos I gotta start studying again like mad for my exams on monday.
I got kind of freaked out when I read Akito was a girl, I was assuming she'd be a guy. But this is cool too. I'm fascinated as to how it will turn out.
| StrawberryAkito 11/24/07 . chapter 1
I dont think Akito is OOC O_O'
Did you read the later chapters?
Akito also has her nice-moments XD
I like this a lot!
I really enjoyed reading this. I hope you update soon?
Its a very great fanfiction, I would be happy to read more!
(And I LOVE the couple Akito/Toru *-* Expecially when Akito is a girl... but I NEVER find stuff with Akiru Shoujo-Ai... so I would be very very happy if you update! *-*)
(Sorry for my crappy english, Im from germany)