Reviews for Knights of the Rebellion

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Promised Flower 2008-07-12 ch 20,	abuseSorry I haven't reviewed in a while... things get busy. That's no excuse, but it's the best reason I've got. :) Once again I absolutely have to comment on your characters. They are interesting, well rounded, and make a person want to read more about them and what they are doing. I like the way you portray both the original characters and all of the new ones that you have added into your story. For me the best element of the story is who's in it. You've got that down. :)
Jen DeClan 2008-07-11 ch 33,	abuseI've had a few weird KoTOR dreams myself, so be proud! You so got into Vader and Gwen's fighting styles and the difference in them. I was worried Ana really had died--hey, in a cut scene in KoTOR 2 Atton dies, doesn't he? And Bao? But I do not have the software to see these scenes. Anyway, will really look forward to more.
Jen DeClan 2008-07-11 ch 31,	abuseIf you want me to critique this then you should not write it so brilliantly and with such passion and fire and emotion--getting into these people's minds and allowing the reader to experience is. WOW!
Jen DeClan 2008-07-11 ch 30,	abuseI know it's been awhile, but I started a new job and have been centering on learning a great deal of new things so did not go on-line--glad I did--you never cease to amaze me! He knew to whip the ship around now and spin once, thrice, shooting as he went, targets lining up with lasers like the polar ends of magnets. Five ships and pilots disappeared into sun-colored conflagration, and then with one final skin-straining turn he locked on to the descent vector just as quickly, diving, clouds streaming off the shields. That above --your description, blew me away. Look out, Mical--you are no match for Bao!
general-joseph-dickson 2008-07-07 ch 33,	abuseinteresting.
Lord Archeron 2008-07-03 ch 32,	abuseSweet story. Revan and Vader dueling is an amazing idea. They are so much alike. I wonder what is going to happen. Is the Exile truelly dead? Update soon please!
general-joseph-dickson 2008-07-02 ch 32,	abuseRevan was just as powerful as Vader and more powerful since Vader lost most of his medichlorians on Mustafar. Why the problems?
general-joseph-dickson 2008-06-26 ch 31,	abuseInterresting.
Promised Flower 2008-06-17 ch 30,	abuseWhoa! I go away for a bit and you have like a hundred new chapters out! Okay, four, but still. Once again, good work. I just finished reading what I had to catch up on, so now I don't have much time to review. Sorry 'bout that. Let me just say it was tremendously entertaining.
SwordMasterZ 2008-06-14 ch 30,	abuseinteresting
general-joseph-dickson 2008-06-14 ch 30,	abuseNice chapter.
Blatant0 2008-06-13 ch 29,	abuseThis chapter is amazing. The ending was confusing but aside from that this is a fantastic chapter. The scene at the beginning was beautiful. I loved reading Atton's feelings and I really liked what the Reera Master said to him. Master Fnaa is a really cool character. I loved your description of him "...gyroscoping..."to cut down the guardians. They are a fantastic idea and I loved Gwen's reaction to them. Thank you for writing them. I love the idea of the film and game era characters working together. Thank you. Bao-Dur was really good in this chapter. I loved your descriptions of his battle with the Sith woman. Thank you for writing.
SwordMasterZ 2008-06-12 ch 29,	abuseMy sugestion you need to have a big Reven vs. Reven conflict soon.
general-joseph-dickson 2008-06-11 ch 29,	abuseBoa Dur fall down go boom.
Blatant0 2008-06-11 ch 28,	abuseThis chapter is great. I loved your description of Vader's thoughts on the upcoming battle but at the same time I felt sorry for him. I loved how you presented him as still possessing redeeming qualities and I liked Gwen and Carth's exchange, it was very sweet and real. Thank you for writing.

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