...Wow... I don't even know what to say to that, but I felt that I just had to review. This was just... Amazing. I love the story line, the way you described things, everything. Though I was upset that Al died, I love the emotional reaction from Ed.
I also love how in the beginning it said that 'It is a well-known fact that when a person displays unnatural behavior, they often do so with extremity.' and then at the end it says 'And Roy Mustang didn't hurt.' I took it as saying he would take the hurt more than others would.
I just overall enjoyed this. I can't wait for the sequel~! :]

loved it!! sad ending though =[ poor mustang...

First off, thank you so much for sending me the link to this on deviantart, and secondly, OH MY JESUS! I LOVED IT! Okay, I'm good. I really can't wait for a sequel!

Aww. I went from a nosebleed to almost in tears. And that's hard to do.

Very well written. Yes. We all make typos, so no biggie there. Still, I can't resist commenting that it was very sexy and I was very sad when Al died. Mawr.

Angsty... But I love it! Like I sayd od Dev keep going! *tumbs up* (sorry for my scrapy english... Im not form any english speaking land)
I love when Ed punchs Roy in face... I wonder what will our little alchemist do (is smacked up side head with Ed "Hey, you are smaller than me! So stop calling me small!" Hoples -mumble- What ever. Im not the one with size complex... -_-)

Amazing, really! It made me cry towards the end. I wasn't exactly expecting Al to just die, especially while Ed and Roy were doing the nasty.

;-:
Can't wait for the sequel.

Holy fuck that was amazing...It was like crazy good and gripping and it made me like sit on the edge of my seat for more. I was completely floored. Must read more now!

Awesomly angsty! you rock!

This is a really nice story. I usually can't read yaoi, but this had a good story line, and was very nicely written. I cant wait to read the sequel! ^^

Hi. It's xfacexthisx from DeviantART.
Anyways, on with the review.

Oh wow. I never expected it to come to that. That's tragic. Poor Edward; the first time he has sex, and his brother dies.
I like the use of italics to refer to the past. I love your writing style, by the way.

As for your author notes, that's pretty interesting about spelling Mustang's name wrong, and making it MustNag. :D

I thought this was fantastic. You said not to say it was hot, but dammit, i want to reassure you XD. Anyways, i hadn't noticed the grammar mistakes, and your style of writing is great.

Well, this story was pretty good. Very sad...
I don't think you went out of character which is good. I'm really looking forward to see the sequel because if we aren't sure that Ed will forgive Roy or not, it'll leave the story incomplete. Good Job. :)

That was a great story. It combined both sadness and love. D: Although, please make the next one a little happier. I'm a huge fan of angst but, things should end happy. >_

Hey, Isikaru from DA here. ^_^ I was kind of suprised that Al actually died. D= But it makes the emotions all that much more intense, so yay. I do hope to see a sequel with a happy ending. Awesome writing. =)As usual.

Thank you. You were brave enough to kill off a character and do what many writers couldn't bring themselves to do. You brought out true human emotion. I really love reading stories writen by writers like you. Keep up the good work.