 SexyShadowGirl 2007-11-13 . chapter 1Aww...^^ I really enjoyed this fic. Nice work Ultima!;) I give you an A++, even though I usually prefer Shadouge fics. This one I can reason with. You write so well. It's not just that though, I think Shadow and Tikal work very well together. I like how Shadow was crying in this too. It makes him seem much more than what SEGA makes him to be. Makes him seem more realistic. And I tend to like that when people write fanfics. Especially if you make the character in character. Just because he's crying doesn't mean he's out of character. It gives him a little more something. You know... Makes it seems like he has more feelings. Well... Anyway... You did good.:) I can tell you put much effort into this too, even if it was a oneshot. There was a lot of feeling in this story, and I love it!^_^
Hope to read more of your lovely fanfic's in the future.^^
~Sincerely,
Caroline
P.S. Did I ever reply to the last chappie of Dreams of An Absent Mind? If not, then I'll be sure to give my feedback to it. Cause it totally Rocked! Anyway... ttyl. Bye.;) |