I'd be scared to touch anything in Lewis's . . . or Cornelius's lab. This really made me laugh. Good job.

DI4MGZ

I know you might be busy, but if you get the chance, can you make a chapter story about Franny Goob and Lewis? I would, but I don't know how to do my story in chapters. If you could tell me, I could do it myself (but only Lewis and Goob would be in it)

I did not think it was possible to make an insanely cute story concerning a rake. But that's exactly what you just did. Way to go. 8D

Whoa! Whoa! Wow! Dang! You came up with this just from the Latin? Dang, that's good! Great job! This is just-whoa! Okay, I'll calm down...This is really good! Brilliant! Funny, and quirky, and awesome...so, what was the outcome for that contesty-challenge thing?

Please, PLEASE write more MTR stuff, please! I absolutely LOVE this!

Fortuna

Hey there, I can't believe I didn't review this sooner. I really thought I did! Honest!

This amused me I loved Franny and Goob's reactions to the Rake/Bomb. Hah. :P You never can tell with Lewis's lab can you?

- The Brunette Bookworm

Dear Frith:

Well, isn't this fun. The anticlimax at the end could stand to be built up a trifle more, and saying that Franny "spat" something "and then - a little warmly - said" something else is an overuse of words (she should either spit or say-a-little-warmly the whole passage), but, other than that, everything looks good - particularly the author's note. Good work.

And by the way, there's no need to feel unsatisfactory because it took you three or four months to write this. There's one person whom I assigned a motto in January and still haven't heard back from.

Sincerely,

Qoheleth

very funny! sure made me laugh.

Wilbur: Me too. Although, I was a *little* disappointed that I wasn't in it.

Me: Not *everything* is about you.

nice work! and write some more stories please!

beanie