wonderful! i never thought it could e so easy for skorous to apologize to his son, after all he did to him. i think your story is a real good addition to all this. i personally love the 'stroll down memory line', it makes it so much easier to understand how the general finally accepted his son. even if it's still a very big change, almost too big! but anyway, real good story!

I think you did an excellent job with this. It fits the episode.