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| KataangNutyBabe 2008-02-24 ch 1,  | abuseWow. I do not like InuKik, that should be clear to you now, but this was a well-written story. And she did keep her promise to him. Who doesn't have a weakness for those ears? |
| Mazakai 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseCONTINUE, CONTINUE, CONTINUE, PWEASE! i liked this surprisingly since it had kikyo in it, and i really cant stand her, but i really did enjoy this, so good job! ~Maz. |
| mysterychild 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseI like how you didn't specify who you were talking about in the beginning. Very well written. There is one thing I don't understand, and it's one of the most captivating lines too. It says the Shikon no Tama glowed forewarningly, but I was under the impression that if the orb was used it would 'disappear'. (Of course this could be wrong, in which case none of this means anything :D) If Inuyasha was human, wouldn't he have used the Shikon no Tama to become so? ... |
| Silent Scribe 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuse*Low whistle of awe* That was an amazing set of scenes for Inuyasha and Kikyo. In all honesty, the best set - both for possibilities and fanfics in general. I liked the fact that you omitted the subjects' names at first since it kept me guessing so I kept reading. First it was Inuyasha and Kagome that came to mind, then Rin and Sesshomaru, then Inu no Taisho and Sesshomaru's mother/Izaiyoi, and finally back to Inuyasha and Kagome right before I read "Kikyo." Your description's was well worded, too! Though I especially enjoyed how you conveyed the confusion and turmoil in Kikyo's heart after her resolution. Nice!! ^-^ |
| Santorsola 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing. You have an very expressive style of writing. The tone and mood was perfect. I loved it, and thanks so much! |
| Angle of Anime 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseAw... I like the end! It's so wonderful! I like the rest of the story too...but the end of it just made me say "aw"... I love the ending...and the rest of the story, of course! -Kikinu |
| wbaker5286 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abusethis is an amazingly wonderful "what if" story. the soulful, plaintive nature of this piece was so moving. wherever did your inspiration come from? you wove a beautiful tapestry with your words. for a short piece, it was packed with so many different emotions. i loved it. there's nothing more i can say, except thank you. |