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Reviews for: Paths Untaken
The March Hatter
2009-08-03 . chapter 1
i loved it! i always wanted suboshi and yui to end up together. and it plays out very well in this fic!
zyryon
2004-10-15 . chapter 1
yay! i reviewed yet another fic! be happy! after all, you asked me to. heh. this one is very nostalgic somehow.. the ending makes me happy though! guess who am i? seeya!
Kang Xiu
2002-11-27 . chapter 1
Must.,....stop....crying.... Oh, this was such a beautiful and sad story!! I loved it. I really, really, loved it. That was great. You...you see the way I keep thinking,. that he could have been a good person if it weren't for Yui's not loving him. THis made my day, seeing such a beautiful piece!
Hui ying
2001-11-24 . chapter 1
*wails* Mei An...I'm so jealous of your fic. Do you know that you write ten times better than half the girls in my top class? Your talents are being unappreciated by the government.
Chikita
2001-10-03 . chapter 1
Aaawww!! It's so sweet! Now, that I've given my praise, I've got to go brush my teeth, it was too sweet! ~.^
catastrophe my world
2001-09-14 . chapter 1
sweeeeeetness! oh wow, was that awesome ^^;; well done; you didn't rush and took your time. the ending was perfect~ beautiful.
Priscilla
2001-09-04 . chapter 1
Oh this was beautifully written! So descriptive and vivid. I loved the emotion you evoked with your language skills. I cried at the end and I'm adding it to my Favorites list. Please continue to write more because your skill is awesome!
Lady Shera
2001-09-02 . chapter 1
Breathtaking...you have clearly brought Yui's feelings to the forefront in this story. She and Suboshi belong with each other, just as Tamahome and Miaka do. In the series, I found myself feeling angry at Yui and sorry for her, mostly because she was being unwittingly jerked around while at the same time pampered like royalty. Her incredible fears and blind anger toward Miaka made her shut out Suboshi (as a lover.) But at least there is a happy end here. Perhaps their love was truly meant for the afterlife, where it could be perfect.
Grasshoppa
2001-09-02 . chapter 1
That was very sweet! It had a nice touch to it, alot like when Tatara and Suzano met again, write more soon!
Black Jade
2001-09-02 . chapter 1
This is neko-chan's friend who helped her post this fic ( she's so terribly un-tech-savvy that she never goes online) Just wanted to say that the ending was put there on purpose, to suggest that lovers in two worlds all ended up the same way in death. Or something O_o;;. I dunno how to explain. Somebody help...?
Abby
2001-09-02 . chapter 1
I loved this, especially the part where Yui stole Suboshi's ryuuseisui. The ending was very nice too, even if it was fairly blatantly copied from Tatara & Suzuno.
Lanen
2001-09-01 . chapter 1
Awww.. This was very very sweet. I love how Yui reflects on their 'different kind of love'. You did an awesome job, and bravo on the completed-part! I know exactly how hard it is! *^-^*
the Red Nothing
2001-09-01 . chapter 1
That was amazing. It totally captivated every single one of my braincells and all of my attention until the very last sentance. Wow, amazing. The emotions are so well-done. Fave. ^_^ Most definately.
Gaberiel Yaslana
2001-08-31 . chapter 1
::grins:: SUGOI! I LOVE this fic. Its so perfect and they end up together..... you know me and Shun-chan! Too bad he had to die.. but this was really good. Very..... good........ ^_^
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