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DCWestby
2009-09-27 . chapter 6
Amen to this chapter. Hope you update soon. I think the song "trigger happy" would certainly fit Uranus and Neptune.
Tri-Emperor of The Twilight
2008-12-24 . chapter 6
Very interesting.
AMWOOD co
2008-12-01 . chapter 6
This is terribly amusing. I don't know whether it's the ludicrous back story or the advancing plot, but somehow I'm hooked. Since this did start simply as a Writers Block Breaker, however, I won't feel *sniff* too bad if *sniff* you *sniff* don't *sniff sniff* update...

WA! THE STORY'S NOT GOING TO UPDATE BECAUSE IT'S NOT THAT IMPORTANT!

I'm such a ham. Excellent work.

From the offices of AMWOOD co
Bobboky
2008-11-30 . chapter 6
sweet chapter, i really like where this is going
Sargon Dorsai
2008-11-30 . chapter 6
I've always liked this story, strange as it is. The only thing I've ever NOT liked about this story is that Ranma is dead. I keep hoping that somehow he'll come back.

Anyway, looking forward to the confrontation between the Senshi. Always do like watching the outers get their asses handed to them. Hopefilly some way Terri will get her powers unlocked again.
AshK
2008-11-29 . chapter 6
Oh wow surprising outcome. Who is going to take Haruka and Michiru's Place? Or have you thought that far yet? I was just wondering. I like this story so far! Keep up the great work!

Sincerely,
AshK
Dragon Man 180
2008-11-29 . chapter 6
Hell yes, punish the two idiots! I'm glad Saturn is a true Senshi. I can just see Teri dragging her to the city office to adopt her into the Kino clan. I mean, Haruka and Michiru aren't worthy parents at all!
Tigger-69
2008-03-12 . chapter 5
Brilliant mix and match of contraversy and heroism. Makoto finds extra power to help but a whole load of problems to go with them. You can feel the dilema that this story gives to Makoto with each bit that is revealed about her past and what she may become. I got a bit confused with the discription of the chicken teriyaki fight but that is just a minor flaw compared to the rest of the story.

Please continue
James Birdsong
2007-12-07 . chapter 3
Not bad
James Birdsong
2007-12-07 . chapter 2
Neat perhaps.
James Birdsong
2007-12-07 . chapter 1
*cheer*
Sargon Dorsai
2007-12-06 . chapter 5
An interesting development. The biggest question is how does Terri replenish her strength? Like a human or like a youma? Or is she something more, having absorbed Ranma in the end? So many possibilities to play with, though I REALLY wish there was a way to bring Ranma back. Wouldn't that be so much fun? Mwhaa haa... er, anyway, I'm enjoying the story and looking forward to seeing more.

The encounter with the Senshi should be interesting. Makato has enough ability to take any one of them on, but combined they are bound to win eventually, even with the Saotome Techniques, which she doesn't know yet. Lets see if they give her a chance to explain. I think they will... and THEN the outers show up.
AshK
2007-12-05 . chapter 4
Good work so far! Keep up the great work!

Sincerely,
AshK
Dragon Man 180
2007-12-05 . chapter 5
Meh, I'm just glad Mercury's words were 'step back' and not 'kill her' I can't wait to see how the rest of the Senshi react. I hope at least Hotaru sides with Makoto, I also don't think Usagi would try to kill Teri considering what that would do to Makoto. Maybe purify any remaining evil in her, but that's it.
ranma hibiki
2007-12-05 . chapter 5
dammit!! an things were JUST STARTING TO LOOK GOOD!! does mecury have to scan everybody!? i like the girl, but sometimes she can be so nosy
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