   zigmas 5/18/12 . chapter 6You got me both excited AND laughing to the ROFL state:
1. Heartbeat in the STOMACH - reminds me of the MIB Series, the guy with two hearts or something...
2. ORPHANimon... :DDDDD
Do you even check your sources?
I mean, your grammar mistakes I can understand - you're in a hurry or simply not too good with English.
But Digi-factual mistakes...
(Like you called Leomon an Ultimate somewhere long ago - I already wrote about that.)
Ehhh... |
| bubbajack 4/3/12 . chapter 10 HOLY SHIT...Tai's mom can cook! Run for your lives its the end of the world! lol Rika has a lil sister huh? That poor girl. Nice chap and a perfect way to end this book! |
| bubbajack 4/3/12 . chapter 9 I KNEW something bad would happen when Juggernautgot turned on! Besides when have ANY of Yamaki's plans EVER worked? |
| bubbajack 4/3/12 . chapter 8 Damn shit went down in this chap! SO MANY MEGAS! Deamon is screwed sixways to sunday now! |
| bubbajack 4/3/12 . chapter 7 Well Umm I don't think this is gonna end well...cause I just got a feeling that when Yamaki activates Juggernaut something bad is gonna happen. I'm not sure what it is but I think it will be bad. |
| bubbajack 4/3/12 . chapter 6 Dang people are hooking up and Biomerging left right and center in this chap! I love it! |
| bubbajack 4/3/12 . chapter 5 This chap was SWEET! Lucemon FINALLY got taken care of the arrogent prick! And now Some of the Digidestined can Biomerge! Lilithmon is one screwed bitch... |
| bubbajack 4/3/12 . chapter 4 Damn! Looks like the Digi crew are in deep shit Tai espically! But then again they've pulled outta worse before. Nice chap I hope everyone makes it out of this lil adventure...alive. |
| bubbajack 4/3/12 . chapter 3 Why do I feel like something bad is gonna happen when thoes orbs touch? Nice chap MetalGarurumon is a badass! |
| bubbajack 4/2/12 . chapter 2 Well shit! You destroyed tokyo...YOU.DESTROYED.TOKYO? WTF? I'm hoping this is one of thoes it gets worse before it gets better senerios! All this aside I got a funny thought...if Beelzemon (The Demon Lord) and and Beelzemon (Impmon's Mega form) fought Wouldn't Impmon TECHNICALLY be kicking his own ass? |
| bubbajack 4/2/12 . chapter 1 Dang an enemy that can give Chaos and Harmony trouble,plus all the other Digidestined/Tamers? Yikes! I would SO NOT want to meet that thing in a dark ally...or anywhere for that matter! Nice chap! |
| myrodin bladekeeper 2/4/12 . chapter 7 ok thats one strike . hope you dont get more,i dont like ship bashing at all. |
| myrodin bladekeeper 2/4/12 . chapter 5 ... realy? |
| Magemon 1/21/12 . chapter 7 the takari fans say "go to hell!" back. haha
but seriously, why davis and not T.K.? |
| Lucky Ryuujin 11/9/11 . chapter 8 Let's see if I can guess the rest of the biomerges.
Cody and Armadillomon Vikemon
Suzie and Lopmon Cherubimon
Joe and Gomamon Plesiomon
Kazu and Guardromon HiAndromon
Kenta and MarineAngemon I have no idea
Izzy and Tentomon HerculesKabuterimon
Matt and Gabumon MetalGarurumon
Jeri and Leomon Saber?Bancho?Grap?
Mimi and Palmon Rosemon
Ai, Mako, and Impmon Beelzemon X perhaps?
Am I close? |
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